New White Collar Fic: Just About Ready to Cause a Scene

[vain_glorious]

“Peter, I didn’t do this.” Neal sat tensely in the chair, arms held together like he was still handcuffed even though Peter had taken them off.

“I believe you.” Peter cast an eye suspiciously back at the two-sided mirror where the other FBI agents were. He’d asked for privacy out of professional courtesy, but he thought they were listening. They

Comments

[theras]

This was great. I thought you did a great job illustrating Peter's moral stance on the whole thing, and his loyalty to Neal as a person, despite his ambivalence, was really touching.

[vain_glorious]

Thanks for the comment. I'm glad Peter's position worked for you. :)

[imbecamiel]

Eee, thank you so much for responding to my prompt! This is awesome! :D

I love, love the interaction between Peter and Neal. And seeing it through mostly dialogue was very cool - I really enjoy seeing people effectively pull that off. And those ending likes: priceless. Oh yes, so true. *g*

Shall definitely be going in my bookmarks of stories to be re-read! ^.^

[vain_glorious]

It was a really good prompt! Thanks for leaving it! I'm glad you enjoyed. :)

[trystings]

This is a delicious fic. You write a perfect Neal and Peter.

[vain_glorious]

Thanks! That's really nice to hear. :)

[virgo_79]

*Great* dialogue, and actually the kind of plot I could see taking place on the show. Really liked this!

[vain_glorious]

I'm glad you enjoyed! Thanks for the comment. :)

[sholio]

This was fun! Great banter, and I loved the last line.

[vain_glorious]

Thanks for the comment! :)