Put The Pieces Back Together My Way 1/2, PG-13, gen, sequel to Unresolved and Questions

[vain_glorious]

The drive was long and boring. Sheppard tried to spend it asleep in the backseat, but every time he nodded off Teyla would thread her hand through his arms and find his neck, searching for a pulse. He finally tried to swat her away, and she just dug her nails into his skin.

“Ouch!” He sat up, rubbing the stinging lines on his throat. “Teyla, if

Comments

[beadattitude]

This is a fantastic story. I'm so glad for the sequels!

[vain_glorious]

I'm glad you're liking it! Thanks for all the feedback! :)

[anonymous]

and he had every intention of lying to her as well

Yes, the hero or macho complex is not getting any better... but it is very much in-character for him, I have to say. It could be that one has to be an adolescent boy to find such a thing admirable or cool.

Sorry for the mini-rant, it's just that your handling of all of these characters is remarkably true to canon, which is quite rare.

[vain_glorious]

Thank you! I've very glad it's working for you. :)

[silver_galaxy]

I loved how the guys are trying to do what Teyla wants-to sent her home

Plus I loved how Rodney wasn't going to let Radek marry Teyla :)

[vain_glorious]

I really enjoyed picturing the Radek-Teyla-Rodney triangle! :) Thanks for your comment!