Versus Time 3/3

[vail_kagami]

Title: Versus Time (3/3)
Beta: nightrider101. Who is awsome. Did I mention how awesome she is? I mean, lately?
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: somewhat dark
Characters/Pairings: Jack/Doctor (10), OMCs
Summary: The Doctor being a brave hero with no sense of self-preservation leads to Jack having to save the universe all on his own. Or so it seems.
Word count: 6301
Note: For

Comments

[nightrider101]

I can't hear you over the sound of how awesome I am! :D

You're such a sweetheart to say such nice things. I also miss you like crazy right now. I need a beer and some good conversation. *le sigh*

Now, onto some feedback!

I loved the ending of this. I mean really loved it. You wrapped it up with lovely aliens and a fantastic plot!

The Doctor basically wins at life here. Jack made the right choices and was willing to sacrifice everything to do what was right.

As always, thank you for sharing! I hope we see lots more fic from you soon!

[vail_kagami]

You will see more from me, just possibly not what you are hoping for. :P
(Merlin is not forgotten, don't worry.)

Nah, you are just awesome. Needs to be said every now and then.

[anonymous]

Wow! This ending was well worth the wait and perfect for the story ........... it was great to see the Doctor staggering into the action at just the right moment. Pushing himself to the limit, as always! Your vivid depictions of the Time Agents and the 'new' aliens really enabled me to visualise the scenes. And the way you really told the story through Jacks hopes and fears was totally captivating.

A great set of ideas turned into a really beautiful and touching adventure. Thank you so so much!

Arithon

p.s. I think you mean "TARDIS" on the last line ....

[vail_kagami]

Argh. I can't believe I misspelled TARDIS... Thank you for pointing that out!

I'm so glad you liked how the story turned out. It was a great promt you game me. I enjoyed writing this for you!

[nightrider101]

Blame your beta!

When you said awesome, you should have said moron. :P

[vail_kagami]

It's not your fault. Nobody would check that, as nobody would expect it to be misspelled.

[vail_kagami]

Thanks!

[rrr_nightingale]

What a wonderful story, it gives a real feeling of time-streams flowing around :) The ending is beautiful, and I am so glad to see such Jack, who understands time and understands the Doctor, not being selfish and trying to save him or something like this... Thanks a lot!

[vail_kagami]

Hey , look at me seeting this comment five and a half years late! Thank you for it. :)