Echoes, Shadows

Aug 18, 2009 05:02

TITLE: Echoes, Shadows
FANDOM: Tokyo Babylon/X-1999
CHARACTERS: Hokuto, Seishiro
TABLE: # 7 - Miscellaneous A
PROMPT: 02. Decisions
RATING: PG
WORD COUNT: 293
SUMMARY: Hokuto, inside the tree, is no longer alone.
NOTE: The final story for this table. Dedicated, randomly, to shinodabear.

There is nothing here but memories. The memories of victims; memories of ( Read more... )

medium: story, medium: drabble, table: misc a, fandom: tokyo babylon/x-1999

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shinodabear August 18 2009, 13:41:59 UTC
This is just breathtaking. I could quote the entire thing back to you, honest, and tell you how brilliant it is. I love the feel to this and how well the words flow together. *squishes you tightly* Thanks for the dedication, hon!

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vail_kagami August 18 2009, 17:44:57 UTC
You deserved a dedication!
I'm really happy you like it! I kind of like it myself, for once.

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nightrider101 August 18 2009, 17:48:14 UTC
This is hauntingly beautiful and chilling at the same time. There's a sense of longing and peace written between the lines. At least that's my take on it. :)

Very nice!

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vail_kagami August 18 2009, 18:25:46 UTC
Thank you. You're not totally off.

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anonymous August 20 2009, 23:02:28 UTC
'It is a lie, of course. The choice was hers, and following her own desires, she sealed the fate of him, of them, of the world, long ago.'

So poignant! I think these lines will haunt me, despite my total ignorance of this fandom. To be fair, they would send a shiver down the spine if applied to any character in any fandom! What a beautiful piece.

Arithon

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vail_kagami August 20 2009, 23:04:01 UTC
Thank you very much. I actually wrote this story just for this line.

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rose_erato August 21 2009, 04:53:30 UTC
This is a wonderful fic! I have to agree that it is beautiful and haunting.

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vail_kagami June 2 2014, 20:26:40 UTC
Aaand Thank you! I either miss this this comment or meant to reply and then forgot. Five years later, it's hard to tell. But thank you anyway, and sorry for not replying.

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