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vail_kagami

All Their Former Beauty

Aug 15, 2009 05:10

TITLE: All Their Former Beauty
FANDOM: Legacy of Kain
CHARACTER: Ariel, Kain
TABLE: # 7 - Miscellaneous A
PROMPT: 04. Betrayal
RATING: G
WORD COUNT: 150
SUMMARY: All Ariel can do is watch, and she doesn't like what she sees. Drabble.

Kain and Nosgoth are one, their destinies interwoven and indistinguishable. Every selfish choice Kain makes affects the ( Read more... )

medium: story, medium: drabble, fandom: legacy of kain, table: misc a

Comments 2

nightrider101 August 15 2009, 18:02:34 UTC

Kain doesn't sound like a looker. At all.

This was my favorite line: He doesn’t seem to care - Kain is a creature of selfishness in the midst of an empire build on deceit.

You present your readers with an overall synopsis of the situation and it looks pretty bleak.

It's nice to see you post something! I hope we see more from you soon.

vail_kagami August 15 2009, 18:44:33 UTC

I want to finish my table. Can you tell?
Will also attempt to get something done for wintercompanion.

Well, this is from the pov of Ariel, who doesn't exactly like Kain, so her perspective is a litte, you know. Not that she's necessarily wrong, mind you...