Turn the Key

Jun 10, 2009 01:39

TITLE: Turn the Key
FANDOM: Tokyo Babylon
CHARACTERS: Sumeragi Hokuto, Sakurazuka Seishiro
TABLE: # 7 - Miscellaneous A
PROMPT: 08. Forgiveness
RATING: G
WORD COUNT: 464
SUMMARY: Hokuto and Seishiro and a random conversation over fast food.

Wars are terrible and the people starting them evil. Corrupted politicians who bleed their people are ( Read more... )

medium: story, table: misc a, fandom: tokyo babylon/x-1999

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nightrider101 June 10 2009, 00:51:25 UTC
I like it! Especially the foreboding ending. :)

I especially like how you described the difference between being tolerant and being nice. Just because you're tolerant doesn't always mean you approve.

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vail_kagami June 10 2009, 00:58:17 UTC
Exactly.
Thanks for reading despite not knowing the fandom!

(Yes... I like that icon of yours.)

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nightrider101 June 11 2009, 13:12:28 UTC
No problem!

You've told me a lot about these fandoms so at least I have some basic understanding. ;)

Isn't it a lovely icon? Every time I see it I think of that song.

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24snowyli_chan June 11 2009, 02:31:13 UTC
wow i loved the interaction between these two. and like the previous poster said, i liked how you named the difference between "nice" and "tolerant" and through that we see the difference between hokuto and subaru, just b/c they're twins doesn't mean they're the same. nice job :)

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vail_kagami June 11 2009, 03:02:49 UTC
Thank you very much!
Their interaction was always something I liked, especially when in switched from fun and silly to murderously twisted (i.e. "If you make him cry, I'll kill you!" *holds knife to throat*) in the blink of an eye.

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rose_erato June 13 2009, 03:45:46 UTC
This does seem like the kind of conversation Seishirou and Hokuto would have. This was brillantly written.

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vail_kagami June 13 2009, 18:41:33 UTC
Thank you very much!

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amamiya_rin July 5 2009, 07:36:08 UTC
sei with his too much curiosity + in depth hokuto = super thrill ^^

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vail_kagami July 13 2009, 20:08:59 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad there's someone enjoying this story.

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etrangere July 12 2009, 20:05:35 UTC
That's awesome. And Hokuto's awesome because even then she found a way to be protective without being hateful ♥

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vail_kagami July 13 2009, 20:09:32 UTC
Yes, Hokuto was just that awesome!
Thank you for reading!

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