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vail_kagami

Through the Ashes (1/?)

Apr 23, 2009 00:11

Title: Through the Ashes (1/?)
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fandom: merlin, medium: story, * story: through the ashes

Comments 25

heartofoshun April 23 2009, 04:37:01 UTC

Great story. You've really drawn me into it. Love the little bits of Arthur's personality that Merlin keeps discovering. Very nice touch. Looking forward to more.

vail_kagami April 23 2009, 20:33:38 UTC

Thank you! More will be provided soon.

frames_in_aria April 23 2009, 05:51:53 UTC

Love the feel you brought and also the idea. Will be waiting for more ♥

vail_kagami April 23 2009, 20:34:41 UTC

The second chapter will be written soon. Thanks for reading!

sadera992 April 23 2009, 19:20:41 UTC

fascinating idea. i never really considered what would happen when he did return before. lovely, can;t wait for more

vail_kagami April 23 2009, 20:36:18 UTC

There are many stories playing with this idea, and most of them are very good. However, I'm glad you like this one!

kathyh April 23 2009, 21:49:02 UTC

Very intriguing start and I'm fascinated by the hints of what happened in the past and dark things to come. The fact that Merlin lost his magic after losing Arthur and is only getting it back now he's returned is fascinating too. Looking forward to more.

vail_kagami April 28 2009, 21:41:47 UTC

Thank you. I hope I get around to writing the next part soon.

_mikan_ April 24 2009, 17:19:54 UTC

...and for one second, when their flight was called and Arthur turned to go, the realization of meaning nothing to the one who was the centre of Merlin’s world nearly broke him.

Aww, poor Merlin. But that will change at some point in the near future, won't it? ;)

vail_kagami April 28 2009, 21:42:59 UTC

Yes, it will. Thanks for reading!