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vail_kagami March 12 2009, 22:20:35 UTC
Thank you!
I was hoping it wouldn't feel too depressing in the end. But your're right, poor Jack!

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teastainedbird March 12 2009, 13:27:22 UTC
Ouch! This hurt so nicely!
The ending is just so perfect for this story. It's quiet but far from meaningless. Like the previous commenter said before the implied idea that the Master flew his ship in the sun is so fitting and so representative of their relationship.
A great ending for a great series.

I loved the scene on the beach. A moment of quiet peace before the end.

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teastainedbird March 12 2009, 13:48:31 UTC
And I forgot:
Poor Jack! Forced to endure eternity on his own. D:

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vail_kagami March 12 2009, 22:22:31 UTC
Thank you! I'm gald I managed to fit in the beach scene after all.
And the Master felw into the sun - in the end the story ended exactly where I wanted it to.

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debart March 13 2009, 03:59:15 UTC
OH my word, this was so good! I completely was seeing this through the Master's eyes and didn't think it'd be the end. What an ending though.. I liked the final passage, it tied the story up perfectly.

Into the light they went.

Nice finish to a wonderful series.

Thank you!

Deb.

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vail_kagami March 24 2009, 22:02:04 UTC
Thank you for reading this until the end!
I'm quite glad it's over. And I suppose so is the Doctor.

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redchilly March 24 2009, 12:00:46 UTC
wow, i have just read the entire series and just wow! i nearly stopped reading a few times as the story almost got too much for me (but i didn't)i have cried my way through the last story. very moving (and disturbing in places) simply heartbreaking, one can only hope that they find some peace in their afterlife. well done on a brilliantly written story.

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vail_kagami March 26 2009, 22:46:14 UTC
The entire series at once? Wow!
I'm glad you didn't stop. Thank you for the feedback - I'm sure that the Master and the Doctor are better off this way, afterlife or not.
If there is an afterlife and they go there together, peace will not be found for anyone ever again. :P

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xtainted_blackx March 24 2009, 22:31:10 UTC
*sobs* you killed off the Doctor in such a beautiful way~

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vail_kagami March 26 2009, 22:43:34 UTC
Yeah, isn't killing a beautiful thing? :P
Glad you liked it!

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