Birthday Fic for Sarkywoman

[vail_kagami]

Title: Over the Edge
Pairing: John Hart/Ten, Jack/Ten, John/Jack
Rating: NC-17 (overall)
Warnings: dark, non-con (in the next part)
Summary: John Hart knows how to make money out of other people's misery.
Note: I started this ages ago and nearly gave it up when Torchwood ret-coned Captain Hart's personality. For sarkywoman  I will now finish it. These are only

Comments

[riverain]

Oh god, what's he done to the Doctor? :o

Anyway, I like it so far. And even despite the strong urge to hurt John, I'm quite interested in how the John/Ten bit is going to play out. *g*

[petit_fox]

OH MY FUCKING GOD!
My heart is racing because it's written so... full of tension. I'm already caught inside this.

[dock_leaf]

Zoiks! Don't take too long in writing the next bit please, I'm never good with a cliff hanger; far too impatient!

There were a hell of a lot of lines in this that I really liked, but I think the 'looks like an invisible spaceship' one was my favourite!

[vail_kagami]

The cliff hanger won't be resolved for now. Well, technically it alreay is as that part has been written, but I won't finsh that chapter for a while. I'm terribly sorry I have to let down my readers like this but right now I just can't, for a number of reasons.

Glad you liked the invisible spaceship. So did I, actually.

[supasass]

Eeee! Can't wait to see how Jack reacts - looking very very forward to the next bit. xx

[vail_kagami]

Sorry about that - I won't continue this until a few things have either worked out or been forgotten. So in any case it'll be a while.
Thanks for commenting, though!

[teastainedbird]

Very intriguing start. I can't wait to see how this develops and Jack's reaction.