Rating: PG
Prompt: #070 - Storm
Claim: The Time War
Table:
HereSpoilers: Season 3 finale
Characters/Pairings: Simm!Master, Doctor (10)
Summary: Set on the Valiant. The Master invades the Doctor's mind and finds more than he was looking for.
Note: I very badly needed to spend some quality time with my Doctor/Master/Time War OT3.
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You should have laughed. You try but have no breath for it. There is no air in this place but while you’re suffocating you’re screaming and it’s the only sound you can hear. )
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YES.
Wonderfully evocative.
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"These aren’t your feelings, have never been, and you learn their names while they tear you apart."
and
" this is the world he lives in and everything it could do to him has already been done"
are my favourite lines.
I like the way that it could be seen (in my mind) from either POV flawlessly and it works. It's quite gorgeous.
(A few typos?
"treats safely on paths" perhaps 'treads'
and "keeping you save" - safe)
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(Corrected the typos.)
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The Master so fucking deserved this comeuppance--not because he's evil but because he's arrogant and underestimates his opponent/lover.
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