Glory

Feb 01, 2008 01:18

Rating: PG
Prompt:  #070 - Storm
Claim: The Time War
Table: Here
Spoilers: Season 3 finale
Characters/Pairings: Simm!Master, Doctor (10)
Summary: Set on the Valiant. The Master invades the Doctor's mind and finds more than he was looking for.
Note: I very badly needed to spend some quality time with my Doctor/Master/Time War OT3.

You should have laughed. You try but have no breath for it. There is no air in this place but while you’re suffocating you’re screaming and it’s the only sound you can hear. )

medium: story, doctor who era: tenth doctor, fandom: doctor who, table: time war

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skipthedemon February 2 2008, 19:50:10 UTC
There’d be nothing for you to live for in the world it would create.

YES.

Wonderfully evocative.

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azdaja_dafema February 3 2008, 22:51:05 UTC
Beautiful. Particularly touching lines were:

"These aren’t your feelings, have never been, and you learn their names while they tear you apart."
and
" this is the world he lives in and everything it could do to him has already been done"
are my favourite lines.

I like the way that it could be seen (in my mind) from either POV flawlessly and it works. It's quite gorgeous.

(A few typos?
"treats safely on paths" perhaps 'treads'
and "keeping you save" - safe)

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vail_kagami February 5 2008, 15:47:57 UTC
Thank you!
(Corrected the typos.)

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anonymous February 29 2008, 20:00:42 UTC

The Master so fucking deserved this comeuppance--not because he's evil but because he's arrogant and underestimates his opponent/lover.

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