The Shade of Somewhere Else (3/?)

[vail_kagami]

Rating: PG-13
Characters/Pairing: Jack/Doctor (10), Team Torchwood
Warning: Mention of torture and rape.
Summary: Maybe taking the Doctor to Torchwood wasn't the best idea Jack's ever had. Though leaving him alone with them can certainly top that.
Note: This one just plain sucks. It reads as if it was written to be qoted at badfic_quotes.
Or maybe that's just me

Comments

[jomel10]

It didn't suck at all! Nice chapter and great characterisation of the whole Torchwood team, with Gwen being concerned, Owen being an arsehole but also wanting to help, Ianto's silentness, I could just tell he was bursting to talk to Jack, and Tosh's worry for the Doctor and for Jack. Its going to be very interesting when the Doctor wakes up in an unknown place with a load of strangers around (cept Tosh of course but will he recognise her?) And will he let on who he is? How will they react? I still feel so bad for Jack, I just wanna hug him.. it wasn't your fault Jack!! Can't wait for the next update! Sorry, there was rambleness there!!

[vail_kagami]

Rambleness much appreciated. I'm not exactly drowning in comments and people who take the time to write more than three words make me happy.

(cept Tosh of course but will he recognise her?)

Or she him? Did she know who she met during 'Aliens of London'? And it was the same actress, but is it the same character? I'd say so, but my friend doesn't believe it.
We'll see. I have the story roughly planned but the detailc come while writing, and usually the characters act on their own anyway.

[jomel10]

Tosh is definatly the same character as was in Aliens of London. The actress was also in a classic who ep aswell, in the eighties!!
She wouldnt recognise him to look at him no but I'd think he would remember her. He's clever like that :)
Just want you to know that you are doing a fantastic job. The last story was just amazing, though so difficult to read, you enjoying hurting poor old Ten don't you?! ;) I hope this whole thing will have a happy ending.. oh and I may have to kill Owen if he hurts the Doctor!!!

[vail_kagami]

The actress was also in a classic who ep aswell, in the eighties!!

Seriously? She must have been very yound then. Which episode was it?

Just want you to know that you are doing a fantastic job.

Thank you!

oh and I may have to kill Owen if he hurts the Doctor!

Owen is not the one I worry about right now. But we'll see how this turn out.

[debart]

Oh excellent!

I haven't had the chance to watch Torchwood yet (no cable teevee), so I'm learning of the characters from you. Will see how good you've nailed them when I do get my hands on the series' DVD set.

Thanks for updating!

Deb.

[vail_kagami]

Thanks for updating!

You're welcome. I know I took my time. Another story got in the way.
Thanks for commenting!