Comments | vail_kagami: SPN Fic: The Ball Is Round (So that the Game Can Change Direction)

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SPN Fic: The Ball Is Round (So that the Game Can Change Direction) | Part 2/2

Feb 03, 2013 18:21

Continued from here.

( Afterwards he had breakfast with stuff he found in the kitchen and made sure to leave crumbled wrappings and bread crumbs everywhere just to piss Sam off. )

fandom: supernatural, medium: story, * story: the ball is round, community: worldwide-spn

Comments 17

amberdreams February 13 2013, 22:47:22 UTC

I liked how you slowly made this get angsty, and brought it round into the start of Season 1, that worked really well.

Great idea!

vail_kagami February 24 2013, 22:27:12 UTC

Thanks a lot! I like my AUs to be not all that AU, if that makes any sense...

amberdreams February 24 2013, 23:06:23 UTC

Absolutely! Me too (when I am writing them anyway)

quickreaver February 22 2013, 05:19:52 UTC

This was SO MUCH FUN! Dean, being all cranky and rolling around in Sam's bed and crumbing up his kitchen, and Sam being his gloriously young, snippy self ... then your wrapped it right into the series. There was some really lovely writing in this one, too. Lady, you are getting SO GOOD!

vail_kagami February 24 2013, 22:27:38 UTC

Aw, thank you! You're too sweet!

x_luciole March 24 2013, 23:55:47 UTC

I'm pretty sure i would never have read such an fic if it had'nt been yours! An AU with Sam as a soccer player? Yeah, not interesting! But I was going through your journal, looking for a fic I would have missed and i found this one and i'm really glad i did! I love your Sam and Dean, I always do but I don't know, in this one they could be so OOC, so wrong but they are not. They are just Sam and Dean, and i really don't know how you do that but they are quite perfect!
Oh and i really love the way you ended the story, like everything could be so different, they would still end up with a burning girlfriend on the ceiling and a missing father. And we just know they are gonne make the same choices, take the same car and kill the same monsters...

vail_kagami January 7 2014, 23:54:56 UTC

I'm so sorry - I totally missed your comment. I just came to this story for meme and finally saw it, almost a year late. This is so embarassing, especially since your comment is so lovely. I swear I didn't ignore you on purpose!
And thank you so muc for the comment.