Comments | vail_kagami: Before Sunset (10/?)

vail_kagami

Before Sunset (10/?)

Oct 30, 2007 02:47

Fandom: Doctor Who
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: AU!Master/Doctor (10), Master/Jack, Jack/Doctor
Warning: Actual non-con this time. Also mind-control and criminally bad coffee.
Summary: Nothing goes as planed for the Doctor, but sometimes that's not even a bad thing. Other times it is.

( Why did the Master always have to use people he cared about to hurt him? )

medium: story, doctor who era: tenth doctor, fandom: doctor who, # series: losing the lifeline, * story: before sunset

Comments 5

quazonic October 30 2007, 03:06:41 UTC

Oh, poor Doctor. :( Jack's so going to regret it. And gosh, the Master does have his mood swings, doesn't he?

Always loving your story. :) More soon, please?

dagnirovanaliel October 30 2007, 03:19:10 UTC

*bursts into tears*

“I thought you’d enjoy being for once taken by someone who actually loves you.”

Oh, God. That bit absolutely broke me. Just... *sobs* Poor Doctor.

*waits impatiently for the next instalment*

elfgirljen October 30 2007, 13:57:54 UTC

silently weeps

marah_sarie October 30 2007, 17:39:43 UTC

Ohhhhh, you are *killing* me here, slowly and painfully. The Doctor/TARDIS scene at the beginning nearly had me in tears, and then... Ohhhh, Jack. I hope I hope I hope I hope he never remembers this. And argh, the last line....

Can't wait for the next installment...

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vail_kagami October 31 2007, 00:45:39 UTC

Thank you! I'll do my best, but I would advise you to sit elsewhere, for it'll take a few days.