SPN Fic: (invisible)

[vail_kagami]

Title: (invisible)
Fandom: Supernatural
Characters/Pairing: Dean, Sam, Castiel
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: self-harm
Spoilers: Up to 7.11
Words: 2487
Summary: Castiel comes back, but not quite. Dean has a hard time with the whole forgiveness business because looking at his brother just frigging hurts now.
Note: Written for the prompt Dean and a revived Cas

Comments

[marziebarz]

When he opens his eyes, he sees Dean and smiles. Dean smiles back. This is fragile, but it’s much better than nothing.GUH. This line. Oh this line, how it melted me into a puddle of goo. Its kind of ridiculously cute in a story that is so very sad. And reminds me that I still havent watched 7x12 and should do that tonight

[vail_kagami]

Heh. Thank you so much! Sorry for the disappointment with Great Blue World - I'm going back to the Friday posting slot with that one, so three more days. (Hope it won't disappoint.)

[marziebarz]

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHH YYYYYYYYYYYYYEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS

I think that anything you write is physically incapable of being disappointing, so no worries =)

*EPIC FLAILING* SO EXCITEDDDDDDDDDDDDDD

I really liked this story too, I promise! Its just I've kind of been on a low-level freakout since the last chapter of Great Blue World posted. And I pester for things when I'm excited about them. Sorry.

[vail_kagami]

No worries, I feel flattered!

And I keep forgetting that other than me, everyone else doesn't know how the story goes on. I guess that was a pretty long break after a mean cliffhanger...

[ephemerall]

I truly love this. This is so intimate and real and I love the way you give them voices without having them say much at all. Beautiful ♥

[vail_kagami]

Thank you! I'm glad it worked for you like this.

EDIT: Sorry for the double reply. LJ didn't show my first one so I thought I hadn't replied to your comment yet.

[4422shini]

Sad and lovely! I adore how you write broken Sam and how Dean and Cas interact with him <3

[vail_kagami]

Thank you! They are actually surprisingly fun to write - in a somewhat depressing way.

[borgmama1of5]

Hurts to read. Which is good, I think.

[vail_kagami]

Thanks, I think. :P

[glimmerella]

*sniffle*

[vail_kagami]

*hugs*