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marziebarz October 3 2011, 03:09:13 UTC
Still as awesome as all the other times I read it. I've gotta say, I think this is my favorite chapter. I just love Dean's POV, because its so complex and so simple at the same time. I love this story so much and its just completely awesome! LOOOOOOOOOVE IT ^_^ I think I got everything else I wanted to say out while I beta-ed =)

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vail_kagami October 3 2011, 10:52:40 UTC
Heh. I'm so, so happy you like this fic. I've had my issues with it, so I'm extra glad to know it must work at some level at least.

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minviendha October 3 2011, 15:15:58 UTC
One of very few things that could convince me to read a Sam/Dean fic: it having your name on it. And boy, am I glad I did. Another thing I don't usually read: evil!boys. But oh lord. Ohhh lord.

You did brilliantly with this. The POVs, including Andy, Dean and Sam still recognizably themselves, the imagery, Sam in Heaven and Sam's connection with Hell...

I'm putting this on my read again list.

Thus proving once again why you are one of my favorite authors in the whole internet.

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vail_kagami October 3 2011, 15:53:40 UTC
Thank you so much for the comment! I'm really glad you liked it - I had a very hard time with this story because it refused to be readable.

Sam + Hell might be one of my OTPs... :P

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insertcode11 October 3 2011, 16:43:05 UTC
I pretty much read anything and everything you write. Maybe not immediately when it comes out, though I knew I would love this and your gen big bang was amazing, but you burned me with that one Dean & Sam apocafic where Dean fed Sam demon blood and kept him outside the compound in is own shack like his own doghouse. SO SAD. ;O; So sometimes I'm wary, but eventually I read everything you post, with good reason.

I love your one-shots, but I'm loving your multi-chaptered stuff even more lately, and this is a good example. The word building and character building, the array of characters that are easy to keep up with and are all so moving no matter how small of a part they have. This, as with everything you do, is such a unique spin on just about everything. I love the epic movement, of moving from heaven to earth to hell. And the outsider POVs are so good because even though Jimmy never liked Sam, Sam's suffering through his eyes was still so heartbreaking and moving ( ... )

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vail_kagami October 5 2011, 20:25:54 UTC
Thank you so much for your comment! I'm happy you like my works!

This story was a bit of a challenge. It never really flowed for me so I'm relieved to know it works for you.

I'm quite happy I chose Jimmy as a main protagonist. Exploring how he would deal with Sam - especially demon!Sam - was fun.

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frozenbrimstone October 3 2011, 17:36:19 UTC
This is amazing, just, completely amazing. I love how you include the Special Children(with the exception of Ava.), now that we're in the 7th season I rarely see them anymore unless it's an older fic.

Cas, oh Cas. I can actually see how this could have happened in the show if Cas didn't ask for help when he did.

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vail_kagami October 5 2011, 20:27:49 UTC
I really wanted to use the special children for this, and if I ever get around to turning it into a 'verse as I want to, I'm going to explore them some more - including the reason for Ava not being there.

And thank you for the comment, of course!

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4422shini October 4 2011, 01:03:47 UTC
Wow. It's really cool to see Boy King stories with modern series twists in them. I love that you managed to write a king of hell story while still keeping it true to the timeline and characters. Love it!!

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vail_kagami October 5 2011, 20:29:40 UTC
Thank you so much! I'm quite fascinated by boy king!Sam, but most fics that feature him also have him evil, which is really not my cup of tea at all.

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