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vagrantdream

smallville fic: truth serum

Jun 30, 2010 21:31

I know I totally suck . I'm editing the epilogue of Ricochet now, though. And making teasers to my next three fics. you get to choose which is first. ;) A hint, 1) Beast turned inside out with Lex and possibly Chlavis fortress destructo-sex 2) Vigilante vampire Davis being stalked by a tiny blonde reporter 3) Animalistic Chloe/Dooms smut, with ( Read more... )

smallville_fic, drabble thing, being human with sw bitches!, writing ideas

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chlavisforever July 1 2010, 03:06:29 UTC

Reference your True Blood GIF:

They are TOTALLY checking out the hot new vamp in town. And they likes what they seez.

vagrantdream July 5 2010, 03:31:59 UTC

OOOh yeah methinks they do.

I need to make a gif when we get our first PROMO!

nonky July 1 2010, 06:15:11 UTC

He tasted like she supposed a guy would taste after you assaulted him in the middle of the night.

Yeah, I bet he did. This was a great line, just perfect for the tone and Chloe's confused drunk/drugged/crazed mood. She's one part brave and five parts crazy right here, and Davis sees that for what it is. Also, I can't figure out how I knew what you meant about the taste of a guy you assault in the middle of the night, but it was very clear even without details that came after.

YAY! Accidentally on purpose ending up in bed together not-smut with smutty introspection! YAY!

vagrantdream July 5 2010, 04:40:55 UTC

Not like I had much experience on the subject, but neither does Chloe. Davis is the one guy I could buy her getting that desperate with. And the one I would be able to see putting her first through it.

I bet you knew- you and all your Davis-proliferating bunnies. ;)

HEEHEE. Drabble tag and you never know what comes out. I can't wait until one of them guilts me into the doing in toxic. I might go at it from a different angle (POSITION), though....

I love your followup stalker CHloe fic to that one. SO REAL. I hope you post it on the fic forum so I can make a proper comment, btw. ;) It is <3

metallicargirl July 1 2010, 16:37:54 UTC

A+ use of Jessica. Sam on True Blood would make my life forever!

trains_lolipops July 4 2010, 03:11:53 UTC

Well, Sam Witwer's gonna be the vampire in the US remake of the BBC show Being Human, that's as close as I think you'll get, but better than just his guest appearance in Dark Angel season two.

My vote's for 2), nothing like a reporter drawn to danger and a vigilante who can supply nothing else. Although they all sound good!

Like the drunken truth idea a lot, but I've gotta say not what I expected in regards to the Committed scene. With all her infinite knowledge, with Braniac powering her brain and her mind control of the machine in Bloodline, Chloe should be able to like tamper with the machine or something. But your angle's still good, not expected, which is something else I enjoy to see, something fresh that I never thought of.

Your closing line is so, so... just, well... everything anyone would want. A bucket by your side following a big night out and the man of your dreams entwined with your body :)

vagrantdream July 5 2010, 04:01:40 UTC

XD Thank you!

Hey don't knock Dark Angel- there's this one- two seconds of it that is just... (:[ You remember the blood feeding bit? It's been perfect for um... vidding...

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trains_lolipops July 5 2010, 10:52:49 UTC

Your Welcome! XD ( ... )

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paraxdisepink July 3 2010, 22:40:01 UTC

True Blood!! Whoo!!

haha Chloe here she's such a nympho for davis whackjob it's funny

they ween't plaid pajama pants were they? That woudl remind her of Clark and eww.

vagrantdream July 5 2010, 03:38:02 UTC

hehe. Jessica's facial reactions are just precious.

Did you see any of Season 3? Bill is finally getting his 'sent by the queen' storyline from the books, and he's also having gross whackjob sex (not with sookeh).

It's getting fun again. I find Franklin so interesting(evil mindrapey, but interesting), but he also had one of the worst sex scenes ever. EYEROLLING.

Plastique-fixated Chloe will always be my Chloe. I kind of feel terrible for her, kinda stand on the sidelines pompom waving.

NO! NO Plaid pants. Davis has too much fashion sense for that. More like sweatpants that keep riding down. (That's a paramedic uniform I would've loved to see in all of his scenes.)

paraxdisepink July 5 2010, 21:06:10 UTC

He does like the low-rise pants. See Bloodline photos for reference. Of course sweatpants would still pose a continuity prob in Legion hehe

I haven't seen s3. I don't have HBO and am too lazy to acquire in other ways. I am still watching s2 DVDs. But Bill was less annoying in s2, or maybe I got used to him. But Bill/Sookeh needed to end so she can get freaky with Eric or something.

vagrantdream July 7 2010, 04:49:04 UTC

Ooh I can relax now. I just finished the epilogue to Ricochet. All I hafta do is tiny revisions and make a cut, and Wooo...
*thuds over*

I guess the Dexy are so hard because they are so particular as characters already whereas Clark isn't much of an individual (besides the conflicted conquer the world thing har har?) and Jimmy's an outlet for the silly and Chloe is my girly perspective. ANYWAY. I'm making Lex helpless and lost so Davis can dream of being his white night hehe.

NOW LETS TALK ABOUT THE IMPORTANT STUFF. Davis/low rise pants. I think this is a terrible ship. It doesn't stay true to logic or character continuity. It's a toxic relationship, because literally, what did those pants to when Davis was getting stabbed in bloodline? They just hung there as you please, hotly. Those pants cut Davis off from all our fun. Now the Being Human would have had Davis go full commando in the words of the Puckerone. Lord knows I've seen enough of Russel Tovey's ass ( ... )