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This was beautiful! jfkhuntly June 23 2010, 01:12:19 UTC
This storyline is GREAT, especially with Davis and Chloe seemingly having sex in the bathtub! Nice work Laura!

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Re: This was beautiful! vagrantdream June 23 2010, 03:56:07 UTC
Hee! thanks john. Davis+ Chloe + Bathtub is one of my numerous otps. Davis just suffers so prettily, he needs consolement scenarios.

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Re: This was beautiful! jfkhuntly June 24 2010, 01:17:33 UTC
Consolement scenarios work perfect for Davis to be honest. After all the Doomsday pain he had his whole life, he needs it.
I need to write some Chlavis scenes happening around S9.

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Re: This was beautiful! vagrantdream June 24 2010, 03:27:47 UTC
Ooh hee! Looking forward to it! XD

I really wonder how well season 9 would have turned out if they had Davis dealing with his PTSD and how he'd been used by his father while Zod came back to earth. It would have been beyond amazing, and what the Superman Story used to be all about, hope.

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trains_lolipops June 26 2010, 07:26:00 UTC
This is story holds a beautiful moment, a moment amidst all the terror and anguish, a moment where Davis can breathe untainted air.
It was a lovely experience to read it while it lasted.
Thank you so much.

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vagrantdream June 27 2010, 18:54:10 UTC
XD

I love your replies, they're just captivating. In my head things like this have happened hundreds oh times for them both. I just can't get how broken Davis looked at at the end of Eternal out of my head.And how when he's dying the memory that comes back to him is of= being alone and abandoned.

I think you're trying to trick me into writing longer things again. It's like... um... subliminal messaging! hehe. I am writing something set in Beast that is longer, trust me. XD And there's also vampire Davis...

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trains_lolipops June 28 2010, 05:06:56 UTC
Ooh, vampire Davis, I'm shivering with antici... pation! (Rediscovered the Rocky Horror Picture Show, yet aain)

I guess I am very subconsiously sneaky, cause while I wasn't intending to ask for length in that reply, I still kinda wanted it. But the bite-sized stories are good too, just a little more inclined to where we get to go on a longer journey :)

Thankyou, for the stories, and the replies to my replies, smiles creep over my unsuspecting face anytime I read either. Your journal is very uplifting, don't ever think otherwise. I only wish I was more motivated to write my own :(, all the pressure of everything is hitting me, right in the middle of my final school year, but maybe I'll write something else soon.

P.S. Dark Angel is like way up there in my fav shows just because of Sam Witwer guest starring :), although Battlestar Galactica (almost finished first season) is much higher

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