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vadriplz

Lesson - part1

Jul 30, 2011 16:50

(The great thing about binary is that it gives Ian hope that even a zero like him will eventually find his number one.)

Ian has a feeling that his perspective is a bit crooked. Things get out of their natural shape whenever Anthony is around, and even if he tilts his head, it does little to help him straighten the horizon. This is but a small ( Read more... )

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smoshyruth July 31 2011, 16:26:01 UTC

"Well I’m in love with him now. Wanna fuck?" wow:DDD haha i loved it!now going to read part 2:)

vadriplz August 1 2011, 06:40:57 UTC

Straight to the point, right? Gets things done more quickly. xD
Glad you liked what you read so far! 8D

mutual_death August 1 2011, 04:13:19 UTC

Wow! That was very well written and just...amazing. I LOVED this story. Mostly because it started out as internal dialogue and random memories that reinforced the "school" theme, then it evolved into a plot at the end when Ian calls Dan. You did a fantastic job with this and I hope you continue to write! [=

vadriplz August 1 2011, 06:55:35 UTC

Ah, sir mutual death, your compliments never cease to make me fluster! *gush*
Thanks for reading~ xD

ext_745545 August 14 2011, 06:38:03 UTC

Wow that was...just wow....i like it but the last line literally almost made me die cuz i wanted to laugh but i didn't want to wake everyone up so i had to hold the laugh......that was epic!!!