and their laughter blends in a kind of un-sought-for joy.
That's breathtaking writing, hon. I re-read it half a dozen times, just letting it kind of sink into my consciousness... beautiful.
The tone you establish is so intimate for such a short piece. You really know how to create an ambiance with very few words and make it feel so natural.
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That's breathtaking writing, hon. I re-read it half a dozen times, just letting it kind of sink into my consciousness... beautiful.
The tone you establish is so intimate for such a short piece. You really know how to create an ambiance with very few words and make it feel so natural.
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