Marvel: Tomorrow Knights (Chapter 10)

Apr 21, 2008 15:36


Title: Marvel: Tomorrow Knights
Chapter 10: Poisoned Fruit
Author: V5_Vendetta
Fandom: Marvel Universe
Disclaimer: Marvel's fictional universe, my characters
Significant Characters: New Warriors (OC), Venom-symbiote, Cuayin (OC), "Brooke Theran"/"Callisto"
Rating: PG-13
Summary: The New Warriors take on "venomous" foes, while Cuayin begins her quest to " ( Read more... )

oc: cuayin, callisto, oc: audrey hopkins, oc: new warriors, venom

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rocaw April 21 2008, 22:49:49 UTC
Oooh...this was great! Loved Callisto being stunned by her abilities at the end. Made it all the more real!

“What people with power always do,” Cuayin answered bitterly. “Perpetuate their own power by any means they deem necessary.”

Oh, the irony... =P

Look forward to more! =)

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v5_vendetta April 23 2008, 03:05:24 UTC
Loved Callisto being stunned by her abilities at the end. Made it all the more real!

It's one thing to fight in a simulated environment. It's another to fight using real muscles in the real world. Sometimes, you prove much less capable in real life than in simulated reality. Sometimes, you prove much more capable in real life than in simulated reality. Callisto's case was the latter.

Oh, the irony... =P

Yes, the irony. While she's pontificating about helpless individuals at the mercy of those with power, she's using her own power to slaughter people who, while not being innocent, are certainly less than powerful compared to her. Yes, very ironic, indeed.

Look forward to more! =)

Thank you. More is coming.

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greeneyelove April 21 2008, 23:17:50 UTC
Very intense. As always, amazing action. You are the best at action scense. Just unbelievable.

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v5_vendetta April 23 2008, 03:05:47 UTC
Thank you very much.

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v5_vendetta April 23 2008, 03:06:25 UTC
Thank you for the compliment.

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well done anonymous May 7 2008, 15:52:10 UTC
nice work, dude

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Re: well done v5_vendetta May 10 2008, 03:04:35 UTC
Thanks. Who are you?

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