Come Due

Aug 22, 2009 23:17

Fair warning: the following is a fanfic.

It seems disingenuous to even apologize for this stuff anymore, really )

fanfic, supernatural

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mimblexwimble August 23 2009, 10:46:02 UTC
I can't tell you how much I love this. I simply don't have the words; it feels like I've been waiting forever for this fic, for this sort of redemption for Sam and now that you've written it all I can say is thank you. This is gorgeous writing, but I think what I liked best is that you touched upon the fact that every stupid thing Sam did, he did for Dean. Even if Dean didn't want it.

Great job!

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utsusemia September 4 2009, 14:56:23 UTC
(just now getting to fic comments) thanks so much! I think I felt compelled to write this fic because I love Sam too much to not do my best to, well, explain him. Because so much of what he did in season 4 is so objectively awful that I had to subjectify it...or something ;)

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apieceofcake August 23 2009, 14:37:06 UTC
Enjoyed, thank you!

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utsusemia September 4 2009, 14:56:46 UTC
Thanks for commenting!

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harrigan August 23 2009, 14:59:34 UTC
This is amazing.

I started to read, intrigued by the genre and summary, but struggled at first because I'm not a fan of/comfortable reading second person fic. So I scrolled down to see the comments, and the one from mimblexwimble convinced me to go ahead and read it anyway.

So I did and am SO SO glad. There is nothing I crave more in fic than themes of sacrifice and redemption (maybe that's what I like the show so much, huh?), and this really delivered!

The tense worked here, surreal and knowing-more-but-not-telling as we bounced back and forth in time. It broke my heart but left me contented and hopeful, and I can't ask for more than that!

(Good luck with your novel! I don't have 50 on my friends' list, or I'd take you up on the offer!)

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utsusemia September 4 2009, 14:53:32 UTC
I knew that the second person was a bit of a risk, but it felt so right for the piece that I went with it anyway. And I'm glad you persevered!

Thanks for the comment, and my apologies for being so late to reply-- I've been on vacation, and not online very much.

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sweetumms33 August 23 2009, 15:33:31 UTC
I read one of your Veronica Mars fics, and it hit me harder than any other fic has before. This is definitely in the running. I love the pacing, I love understanding even a bit of Sam. The way they love eachother, its in every single word of this story.

I don't even have the words for this...definitely the SPN fic I'll compare everything else to.

I will look up your book, it sounds good!

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utsusemia September 4 2009, 14:52:13 UTC
Oh, you read some of my VM fic, too? That makes me bizarrely happy ;)

Thanks so much for the comment. Writing new fic for a huge fandom like this can feel a little daunting.

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devon99 August 23 2009, 15:53:59 UTC
A stunning piece of work, thank you. I thoroughly enjoyed it.

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utsusemia September 4 2009, 14:50:53 UTC
Thanks so much! (And apologies for taking so long to reply!)

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