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idiot4dean May 27 2009, 13:27:52 UTC
Not only have they got Dean but they got Sam too. With the film they've got blackmail material to keep both Sam and Dean where they want them.

Typical porn ending! The climax but nothing more!!!

Thanks for this, looking forward to your sequel (that's going to be harder to get right!)

Hugs

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idiot4dean May 27 2009, 22:33:44 UTC
You added more. It worked well.

I agree with spn-fam on a sequel where we see the aftermath of the nights events with Nate and Lucas continuing to dominate Dean after showing him the video. Not all stories have the trite 'happy ending' with Dean winning through and this never read as one which should. If people want h/c and the nice things what are they reading non-con for? They should heed the warnings and realise things ain't gonna be nice for the boys.

Love the story.

Hugs and thanks for sharing.

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usmc75 May 27 2009, 22:34:54 UTC
lol no problem....now i need to find time to write everything

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idiot4dean May 27 2009, 22:37:11 UTC
Now I've got a day and a half to get myself together before meeting the actors behind the Winchesters!!!

I always think of any hurt Dean fic as the opportunity to give him a mental hug after. So for this I get the real deal!!! Not really but there will be photos!

Hugs.

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rocit63 May 27 2009, 15:48:00 UTC
this was very well done, Hot as hell too! I have to ask what will you work on now? The Prisoner, Self Pics or do you think you will be doing a sequel to Domination? I've really gotten into your stories, more soon please!

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usmc75 May 27 2009, 16:07:24 UTC
LOL...not sure...a lot of people were upset by this one and wanted a reason...

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ciararose1 May 27 2009, 16:39:13 UTC
I hope you will do a fic where Dean overcomes what has been done to him. I think most of us would like to see that and perhaps a reason why they did this to him, because I can't picture Dean doing anything to hurt his brother or his friends to the point where they would do such a thing. And, I don't buy jealousy either. What was done to him was pure torture and nothing else. He needs to have some healing in the next fic. Whether it is leaving his school and whatever town they are from or whatever but he needs to get away and start over. Hope they don't do anything with that video.

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usmc75 May 27 2009, 16:48:16 UTC
I will make sure to add that into the story soup I am brewing right now...a lot of people seem to have a strong opinion about this story.

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jaimeb99 May 27 2009, 16:52:57 UTC
I am on your friend list for LJ but I can't seem to find how to get to where I can read your other wincest and RPS fics. Can you tell me how? Thank you. I really enjoy your stories.

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usmc75 May 27 2009, 17:05:12 UTC
Most of the Wincest stories are all stored in January of this year....they are backdated to preserve the FL of my friends whoa re not into Wincest

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spn_fam May 27 2009, 17:25:59 UTC
I am one of those who normally only comment to n/c as an anon poster as it's a very private kink for me, but your chapters all disabled anon posting so this is me delurking finally after creating a new account to tell you how much I loved this. Especially the final twist with Sam going down too

I would love a sequel as the one thing I felt this story was missing was the sobered up Dean viewing the video at the end, and then getting to see how Nate and Lucas keep him under control from then on. There are literally hundreds of hurt/comfort fics in Supernatural fandom of Dean recovering from rape if thats what people are looking for, but it seems that many comments are being quite ungracious in coming to a fic that is labeled n/c just to complain that it damages their view of the character and they want you to fix what you have written so far. Written as really hot porn it is more than successful, and you should know there are readers that appreciate the story for what it is, not what they think it should be.

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usmc75 May 27 2009, 17:28:00 UTC
Well thanks, I wish I could find the guy who wrote it and tell him his story had a reaction...I think a sequel is going to have to happen or they might rn my house down :)

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jaimeb99 May 27 2009, 17:29:08 UTC
Hey, I kept waiting for Dean to orgasm through the whole story but he never did? Even with all the drugs and fucking Dean never came himself? I thought for sure it was leading up to him having a major orgasm from all that prostate stimulation and then they would have even more to taught him with and finally he would admit what they wanted. Is his cock broken? LOL

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spn_fam May 27 2009, 17:35:04 UTC
I wondered that too, especially when Dean was described as being so sensitive towards the end. I was half expecting Nate to torture Dean with a cock ring to get him to beg for release

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usmc75 May 27 2009, 17:36:24 UTC
Hmm...you know he never did...that's not fair...look like I have to edit this one as well

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usmc75 May 27 2009, 17:44:37 UTC
Ok changed the ending from the author's original...

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