SN-I'm Buring For You:E4:No Son of Mine-Part One

[usmc75]

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oh the times have come

[nocturniquette1]

I really loved this.
From the start...with the introduction of the not quite right teacher that slowly becomes a monster in the midst of the children...
then meeting Ben from her standpoint...
Dean finding out he has a son...
Sam being deeply amused at his brother's antics and discomfort...
Sweatpants for a buffet. HA.
I love the dynamic between father and son and most of all, Dean saying but not quite saying- how seriously he would take being a father.

Re: oh the times have come

[usmc75]

Thanks, I was REALLY worried about taking on Ben...but I think he kind of fits with THIS Dean.

[bewitch_you]

:-) and here i'm am coz you've been recomendet ;-) from nocturniquette1 and i'm so glad for it :-) it's really smth different and i like Ben and Dean :-) the idea for Lisa is so... yeah :-) i really liked and surched for a second part but I quess i'm going to wait for it ;-) and hope you won't make us wait :-)

RYL

[usmc75]

No I wont...have you read the previous episodes? This is episode four

[phantom4j]

This is as good as the other parts of this big story have been! I am SO needing to get back home to sort through everything and find out where I am with what section? It's too diffiulct when I'm on a borrowed computer and snatching reading moments when I'm able...

I love this story!!!!!

[davincis_girl]

Prelude: Wow, I prefer this to the “your not his dad” cannon. Much better.

One:
“Rather face the demon.” Dean mumbled. Ha!
Love little Ben inspecting Dean to see if he’ll do as dad material. Little mirror image Ben at the buffet is also hilarious.