Metal

[ninamazing]

Title: Metal
Author: ninamazing, or Nina
Word Count: 896.
Progress: 2/50 for 50_darkfics. Table here.
Rating/Warnings: PG-13 for some sexuality.
Pairings/Characters: Mal/River. The OTP of Hot.
Spoilers: Not too apparent. You could get by, for sure.
Author's Note: Didn't mean for the break to be that long. And yes, there's no chronology here -- it's write-what-I-feel

Comments

[nursedianaklim]

Ohhhh, this is awesome. I love your River voice, and Mal, and I seriously want to marry this line:

and Inara was so far gone she'd locked even herself out of her dreams

Beautiful.

[felicity_dream]

River's so far gone? I'm so far gone now...Damn you and your amazing, gorgeous, addicting fics!

[buffybot76]

Eerily beautiful! Lovin' your Mal/River fics so far. Off to read another!

[roses_in_may]

fantastic. :)

[idella]

I found this on my del.ico.us! From before I knew you! I'm not reading much Firefly these days, so I hadn't read it. UNTIL NOW.

This is awesome! It is so awesome that you make we want Mal/River. WHO WOULD HAVE THOUGHT?

Very sexy and sad. Poor River. I want her to get what she wants. GET WITH THE PROGRAM, MAL! SHEESH.

Cold, she thought, cold, the look in Mal's eyes and the feel of the metal between her legs, her hands up her skirt, pressing into her, making her breathe too hard -- maybe he'd yell at me, push me, touch me too fast, no more gentleness -- maybe this was what he wanted, this was what he was afraid to see, River giving in, taking everything she got and coming back with kisses, sweetness, against his metal eyes.

Very evocative.