Comments | uscathena: FIC: Childhood (7/12?)

uscathena

FIC: Childhood (7/12?)

Jul 07, 2006 00:56

Again, not the way I wanted it to go, and it had to be rewritten like three times. Grr. Meanwhile, this fic's now up on ff.n and oba made me an awesome Kyle lj layout :-D

( oba love ahead )

keyword-10, fic: childhood, keyword-11, fan fic

Comments 3

miana_dude July 7 2006, 10:49:40 UTC

I'm loving this fic. YAY!

uscathena July 7 2006, 22:41:24 UTC

Thanks, Mi

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uscathena July 12 2006, 03:08:01 UTC

*so THRILLED there's something to catch up on feedback on*

*trilled that you're thrilled and still willing to reply to this story*

I find it interesting that you start this one with a fight, considering that I know you're somewhat uncomfortable with fight scenes (though you do just fine).

It wasn't really all that hard to write, even. It seems that lightsaber/Jedi fights are probably some of the hardest to write, so maybe a knife fight between two normal people didn't look so daunting. Or maybe I just got over my irrational fear :-p

(yardwork has it's own benefits, oddly ;) )

In the opinion of some ... My own personal hell involves a large lawn, the summer sun, a lawnmower, and pickaxing the rock that my mom calls a backyard :-p Anywho, you're right though ...

John is clearly having an impact on Kyle, I guess I want to say, having an impact on his survival.I think this post and the next one sort of show that. John's training - patience and analysis, for example - is clearly winning out over what Perry is trying to teach him. ( ... )