MagicDrafted - Noa App

[usb_noa]

[[REMEMBER; since this journal is used for two different Noa, only the journals with the 'magicdrafted' tag apply to the Noa in this app. The rest are literally from another universe.

...Do say something if I accidentally give THIS one the AUNoa's verbal 'piko' tic.]]

PLAYER INFORMATIONNAME: Usagi
AGE: 19
JOURNAL: None... (Contact through the journal

Comments

REVISIONS

[magicdrafters]

REVISIONS
The mods feel that though your app is strong, some adjustments need to be made. Please address the following points required for clarification:
● Expansion on the power and abilities section to include translation of Noa's power to HP canon spells and classes.
● Any character should always have a few flaws and short comings. We'd like to see you expand on that section to include what abilities and magic in Hogwarts might be difficult for him to master and achieve at.

Please reply with your revisions as a comment to this comment within 72 hours so that the mods can see the changes made to your app. Thank you!

Edited!

[usb_noa]

And the revisions in full, are here (though they have also been placed in the 'Abilities & Powers' section in the actual app

[magicdrafters]

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