Comments | usako_mamoru: Time

jojo_da_crow in usako_mamoru

Nov 14, 2005 22:40

Not my best work, but I hope you guys still enjoy it!

Theme: Time
Word Count: 444

( Time )

Comments 7

0wned_like_wh0a November 15 2005, 16:02:09 UTC

hehe, that was cute, I really enjoyed that! it's uber-sweet that Mamo-chan would take the longer route via the park. love the last line, especially!

jojo_da_crow November 17 2005, 07:15:09 UTC

Hehe, thanks. ^_^ I'm glad you liked it. I was afraid that it wouldn't be liked. ^_^

usagihime22 November 15 2005, 16:37:46 UTC

Awww!! I *heart* secret admirer type stories. Mamoru's desperation gets me every time.

jojo_da_crow November 17 2005, 07:16:04 UTC

I know! I always love stories where he trys to play it cool but doesn't really suceed. ^_^

mokoleena November 15 2005, 20:58:51 UTC

Girl, that was beautiful! It really made me smile, I loved the last bit "maybe he had been right on time." Beautiful. *smile* Great job.

jojo_da_crow November 17 2005, 07:16:33 UTC

I'm glad I could make you smile!! If it made you smile then it was certainly worth writing!

goddess_of_ice November 22 2005, 22:53:43 UTC

Very nice! I loved seeing it from both Usagi and Mamoru's perspective. I've noticed in most drabbles they only do one or the other...