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amethysth in usako_mamoru

Second Period, Books

Jul 10, 2010 00:51

Period: Two, Literature
Theme: Books
Words: 763

*This drabble is dedicated to touchthesoul because it was impossible to write and because she is responsible for introducing me to the lascivious world of rakes and the rakishly awesome book, How to Marry a Marquis, which this is very very loosely based upon (not really, I just stole the title, though I guess ( Read more... )

amethysth, books, 2010 anniversary challenge

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amethysth July 10 2010, 06:05:51 UTC

Haha, thanks. I kind of had no idea what to do with this theme, so I'm glad it turned out okay. ^^;;; (This is the product of reading too many romance novels--so many that I started typing and didn't even realize what I was writing until I was mid-way through. XDDD)

roxyk630 July 10 2010, 06:29:11 UTC

Awwwww! I love it when he's pining in his brain and things totally backfire on him. It's cute! XD;

Adorable!

amethysth July 10 2010, 06:39:21 UTC

Thanks! (And lol, writing Mamoru's pining, panicky thoughts is so much fun! XD )

dhoney July 10 2010, 13:00:52 UTC

Sooo, do we find out what the incriminating object was later?

I agree with the above - I liked his internal thought process the most. The parentheses & the cross-out & the italics. It shows how he's thinking so passionately and furiously while still maintaining his Mamoru logic.

And that's an ending I didn't expect. :)

amethysth July 10 2010, 16:20:05 UTC

Thanks! And haha, if I can fit it into one of the themes, sure. :D Thank you for reading! :)