Ahh, how ironic! I just happened to glance by your ffnet site today, so I'm glad you're updating (once more)! Cute take on the theme, and a good reflection of the internal workings of that [demented] mind of Serena's. Although I would say that the bit about her jolting up in the dream and shrieking "Darien!" was a little sudden and unclear, because there was no preceding reference at all to the image having changed at that moment (from Andrew to Darien), the idea is good overall, and well-executed!
Welcome back to the drabble realm, then! I expect to continue hearing from you on these!
I couldn't help but flash back a bit to Alicia Blades "Grimm Tale" story, just because of the Snow White symbolism. ^_^ Definitely not a bad thing.
I thought this was exactly like something that would happen in the actual series, very realistic and in character. ^_^ Especially the bit where you have Serena already fallen back asleep, it was a nice touch. Glad to see you back in the writing groove again, and hope to see more from you! *cough* Ice Chamber *cough* ^__^
lol, I think I was reading the latest chapter of Grimm Tale and it gave me the idea for this.
eee, and I'm glad you think it was something that would happen in the series :D I've been rewatching the eps over the past few days (thanks to all those DVDs I managed to get cheap) and they've really inspired to pick these drabbles up again.
You'll see Ice Chamber soon *winks* But Nineteen-Seventeen has to be finished first. I'm determined that it will be finished by the end of April (I'm not going to let it flounder around on my laptop for another whole year), so keep an eye out for that one :)
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Welcome back to the drabble realm, then! I expect to continue hearing from you on these!
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Yet, a dream fit for a princess :).
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I thought this was exactly like something that would happen in the actual series, very realistic and in character. ^_^ Especially the bit where you have Serena already fallen back asleep, it was a nice touch. Glad to see you back in the writing groove again, and hope to see more from you! *cough* Ice Chamber *cough* ^__^
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eee, and I'm glad you think it was something that would happen in the series :D I've been rewatching the eps over the past few days (thanks to all those DVDs I managed to get cheap) and they've really inspired to pick these drabbles up again.
You'll see Ice Chamber soon *winks* But Nineteen-Seventeen has to be finished first. I'm determined that it will be finished by the end of April (I'm not going to let it flounder around on my laptop for another whole year), so keep an eye out for that one :)
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