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Feb 11, 2007 03:04

It's late. Well past my bedtime and yet I am wide awake and can't pull myself away. It's become my addiction, and I love to share it with whoever I can. Anything to get out of studying, right? Procrastination, the sweetest drug. Anyway, here are two of my newer drabbles! I hope you enjoy them!
(Thank-you to everyone who read my other drabbles, means ( Read more... )

hair, karma, chewy-chan, 100 themes

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goddess_of_ice February 11 2007, 12:49:43 UTC
*laughs* Those both were awesome! The interaction between Usagi and Mamoru is not only hilarious and canon but refreshingly new at the same time. I have absolutely no critique on either of these drabbles, in my eyes they were both perfect. ^_^

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goddess_of_ice February 11 2007, 12:50:20 UTC
Oh I just noticed something, don't forget to put your username as one of the tags!

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chewy_chan February 11 2007, 16:08:34 UTC
I'm not entriely sure how to go about doing that, I only just figured out how to do the easy tags, :|. Is it supposed to lead to my profile or just to a list of stuff I've posted?

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goddess_of_ice February 11 2007, 16:18:37 UTC
Anything that you tag with 'chewy_chan' when someone clicks on that tag they'll be able to see all of your stories you've . You seemed to have fixed it now, or maybe I just didn't see it up there before.

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chewy_chan February 11 2007, 16:19:43 UTC
I guessed, :D.

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shadowravyn February 26 2007, 18:29:33 UTC
I definitely loved the interaction between Mamoru and Usagi in "Hair". Like goddess_of_ice says, it's both canon and fresh at the same time. A minor critique, if you don't mind?

Mamoru lifted his hand to her head, replacing her own. He softly rubbed Usagi’s head where the strands had pulled. can easily be combined to Mamoru lifted his hand, replacing hers, to gently rub her head where the strands had pulled. The two sentences feel clunky.

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