Theme: #58 At the End of the Day

[goddess_of_ice]

Sorry it's been so long since my last drabble posting, I had some trouble with this theme.  Title ideas and constructive criticism strongly encouraged. Enjoy! ^_^

Words: 100

Usagi couldn’t figure out why she was upset.

It wasn’t like she got jealous when Rei hung off Mamoru’s arm all day.  Her heart didn’t speed up when she caught him watching her

Comments

[moon_destiny]

Awesome fic! Just the fact that she's thinking of *not* caring about Mamoru shows that she *does* care. And it was very descriptive for a hundred-word drabble.

[goddess_of_ice]

Thanks, I'm so glad you liked it because like I said in my comments above the drabble I had quite a bit of trouble with this theme. ^_^

[chierian9el]

Nice drabble! Sure, Usagi... of course you don't care.. not at all.. but we all know better;)

[goddess_of_ice]

Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. ^_^

[shadowravyn]

Veeeeeery nice. I am jealous that you can compact so much feeling & emotion into so few words. I have yet to master that trick.

Nicely done!

[goddess_of_ice]

Thank you very much. ^_^

[usagihime22]

Can we say deniiiiiial?

Lovely fic, surprising that it was only 100 words! You captured a lot in it.

[goddess_of_ice]

Thanks, I surprised myself as well. ^_^ *laughs*