Theme: #56 Red String of Destiny

[goddess_of_ice]

Quick update... Yes. *shifty eyes* Constructive criticism strongly encouraged for this one, because I don't really like it.  And it's in no way related to the "Date" trilogy. Enjoy.

Words: 100 (look! A true drabble!)

Follow me.
Follow me through the past and into the future.
A future of light.
A future of warmth.
A future of love.
We shall always be

Comments

[pgsm_serenity]

nice job! do you like rpgs by the way?

[goddess_of_ice]

Rpgs? Are you the reviewer from fanfiction who told me about youtube.com? If that's what you're talking about then yes I liked them very much and I even started watching the Sailor Moon episodes. ^_^ I just finished watching episode #8. Thank you so much for telling me about that website (if it was in fact you, if not ignore my entire blabberings...).

And I'm glad you liked the drabble. ^_^

[goddess_of_ice]

...I am dumb, just re-read this and I actually understand what you mean now. Rpgs means role-playing games right? *facepalms* I've actually never tried, but I've always wanted to. ^_^

[pgsm_serenity]

well i need an ami in both my rpgs! one rpg is usagi and mamoru! the other rpg is about usagi and seiya being together! interested?

[braychiba]

Congrats on a true drabble!
I found the poem to be delightful , and a fantastic use for ' The Red String of Destiny challenge. Good work!

[goddess_of_ice]

Thanks! I didn't really like this one myself, but as long as you readers like it I'm happy. ^_^

[usagihime22]

Ah, I don't understand why you don't like it! I thought it was wonderful, especially the last line--so funny and unexpected!

Hm... maybe if you somewhere suggested that the poem was for Mamoru...? But I don't really know that that would improve it. I really think it's fine as is. =)

[goddess_of_ice]

Well I'm glad you enjoyed it although I still have my doubts. Maybe I'm just not a poetry person... ^_^;;