Comments | usagi_atemu_tom: A hidden femme's secret

usagi_atemu_tom

A hidden femme's secret - Part Three

Oct 08, 2011 04:32

Wow, so the final chapter turned out SO long I had to split it into two part, because I honestly cannot expect you people to read through over 30 pages straight. Thank you everyone for following this story. I hope you'll enjoy the final conclusion. And already here BIG thank you for my betareader again because she sacrificed a LOT off her precious ( Read more... )

romance, tf-bayverse, drama, prowlxjazz: 11, transformers, angst, multi chapter, rated pg-17, comfort, fanfiction: 2011

Comments 6

fianna9 October 8 2011, 03:36:19 UTC

You did a wonderful job showing the improvisation necessary during mission like this. Very well written.

usagi_atemu_tom October 8 2011, 10:42:42 UTC

Thank you very much. I am glad you approve of the improvisation.
And thanks for commenting. ^^

renegadewriter8 October 8 2011, 04:20:50 UTC

Ñuuuuu!! Poor Jazz and Prowl! I hope they get out alright!! *goes on to read the next*

usagi_atemu_tom October 8 2011, 10:40:44 UTC

Well, since you arealdy read the next part, I am sure you now know if they are or not. XD
Thanks for commenting. ^^

darkeyes_17 October 8 2011, 05:26:44 UTC

Very nice improv by Jazz and Prowl in that segment. Also, making Prowl have a hologram of being a femme was a great plot point, one that I thouroughly enjoyed.

usagi_atemu_tom October 8 2011, 10:46:16 UTC

The whole write of the story was an act of improvisation for me, therefore why should Prowl and Jazz not be forced to do the same in the story? XD
I considered Prowl getting reformatted slightly as Jazz was but that did not fit. Also it would be hard to cover his spark that way. Hound's way of transmitting holograms worked just perfect, therefore. ^^ I certainly needed Prowl by Jazz's side, it was an important act of the story.
Thank you very much for the review.