A hidden femme's secret - Part Two

[usagi_atemu_tom]

Title: A hidden femme's secret
Subtitle: Pain of the past
Part: 2/3
Author: Usagi-Atemu-Tom
Verse: TF-Bayverse
Anniversary Challenges: Week four prompt - # Daring rescue

Rating: PG 17
Genre: romance, dark, angst
Warnings: death (no main character), discussions of rape, abuse, slavery and abortion
Pairings: Jazz/Prowl, mentions of Ironhide/Ratchet
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[fianna9]

Grim but hopeful. I'm enjoying how your setting everything up in this story. Jazz/Sparksong did a very good job freeing the others; too bad they were betrayed. I'm looking forward to more, especially the rescue.

[usagi_atemu_tom]

This story has been getting longer and longer than I ever planned, I have to say. XD First I only wanted to write down Jazz's story and the femme she freed could have been anyone, just the Breeders were the bots she recognised and therefore killed on the spot. But then the sudden thought of betrayal entered my mind and I could not get rid of it. And suddenly the story involved more than just Jazz running berserk and turning out to be female.

Thank you very much for your comment. And the rescue should be hopefully written down before the end of the week. Have to say if I find enough time to write in peace without so much haste, because I want to add the one or other scene that I am certainly unable to write when in hurry.

[renegadewriter8]

*flials* moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremore !!! XD

Poor Jazz, but thankfully he- she got out and now has managed to find her friends! Hope she gets there in time!!

[usagi_atemu_tom]

I am trying me very best. Hopefully the final chapter will be finished before the end of the week. ^^

Thank you very much for commenting. And yes, Jazz certainly is thankful herself that she got away. But now her friends need her, one more time. ^^

[usagi_atemu_tom]

Well, we'll see if Jazz gets her chance at aft kicking. She certainly will not allow her femme friends to stay prisoners. ^^

Thank you very much for commenting. ^^

[darkeyes_17]

What a thought provoking situation. It is sad, but holefully Jazz can put a stop to it once and for all. It's so sad about the sparklings. The fact they had to abort.

And Prowl was so supportive and sweet. I love to see that.

[usagi_atemu_tom]

The part about the sparklings was one of the hardest to write. Especially since I am not usually a fan of such themes. However, during the writing I realised that Jazz would certainly try to prevent any femme sparkling from suffering her fate, therefore the only option that turned out was for the poor things too die before they are born.

And yes, I prefer Prowl that way. He certainly saw that Jazz needed the emotional support. And as hard and sad as it all is, he sees the logic in Jazz actions, of course. Ratchet did as well, or he would have had more to say to Jazz, than simply be shocked.

Thank you very much for your comment, it's appreaciate and loved. ^^