Comments | usagi_atemu_tom: Dance me to eternity

usagi_atemu_tom

Dance me to eternity

Sep 15, 2011 02:06

Title: Dance me to eternity
Part: 1/1
Author: Usagi-Atemu-Tom
Anniversary Challenges: Week two prompt - Dance
Genre: slash, romance, drama, comfort
Warnings: Character death
Pairings: Jazz/Prowl
Feedback: Please, yes, I love feedback! =^^=

Summary: No one ever knew or even suspected anything. But now that HE was gone, it was hard to keep it all in, ( Read more... )

romance, tf-bayverse, drama, prowlxjazz: 11, one-shot, transformers, angst, comfort, fanfiction: 2011, rated pg, death

Comments 14

thalanee September 15 2011, 06:45:56 UTC

This was so unbelievably sweet and sad. Normally I don't like these kinds of stories, but I love this!

*goes of to cry in corner*

usagi_atemu_tom September 17 2011, 01:28:19 UTC

Thank you very much. The emotions were important in this story, so I am very happy I got this over so well. And I understand you so very well. Usually I am not a fan of death fics myself. But I just could not resist the pull of a fanfic, where Prowl goes with the dead Jazz into afterlife to be together forever. It's one of the few scenarios that I see as a happy ending still, even with both dead.

Oh and sorry for the late reply. I had to prepare a lot of things for the current convention, so I could not spare time to reply.

wicked3659 September 15 2011, 16:46:57 UTC

*sobs*

usagi_atemu_tom September 17 2011, 01:29:14 UTC

*hugs*

zea_taylor September 19 2011, 07:02:46 UTC

Very sweet and very sad. I like that you showed the consequences after Prowl's decision, as well as what it meant for the mech himself.

usagi_atemu_tom September 19 2011, 11:01:59 UTC

Thank you very much. I have to admit I could have gone two ways. Either I let them continue to dance and the readers guess what happened, or I write it out, as I did. The last was more appealing in my opinion, because it had this feeling of finallity, which suited a one-shot so well.

Thank you very much for your feedback. ^^