Saving Life - Prologue

[usagi_atemu_tom]

Title: Saving Life
Part: Prologue/12
Author: Usagi-Atemu-Tom
Warnings: angst, romance, suspense, slash, SPOILER for Transformers Movies 1+2
Pairings: Jazz/Prowl

Feedback: Please, yes, I love feedback! =^^=

Summary: When one mech is on the edge of being offlined forever, another mech realises the truth of his past and the destiny he is supposed to have

Comments

[darkeyes_17]

Interesting start. Although the thing is, I hope you change 'Barricade's/Prowl's' appearance. It's a bit of a selfish thing for me, but I can't picture Prowl AS Barricade forever (personally, I'd like to think that Prowl is more handsome than that, but again, it's just a selfish thing for me).

But you have a great and sincere writing style. Can't wait to see more.

[usagi_atemu_tom]

*snickers* You are not the only one to think so about Prowl's looks. But you have to wait and see to find out what will happen about Prowl's appearance. Thank you for your nice comment and insight. I am going to post the next chapters within these days until I caught up with the current chapters I have up on fanfiction.net and deviantart already.

[dvana]

Nice. I would have actually liked to see you take some more time with this, but as it's a prologue I understand the desire to get on with the meat of the story. I'm generally quite fond of the prowl-as-barricade concept and I'm looking forward to the rest of your tale. Thanks for sharing!

[usagi_atemu_tom]

Thank you very much for your comment. Yes, things went a bit fast in this prologue but you are right it was meant more or less as an introduction for what is to come.

As for the sharing - your are welcome. ^^

[bowsie22]

Love it. Not too fussed about Prowl's appearance. Once he keeps the doorwings I'm happy =D

[usagi_atemu_tom]

*lol* Prowl would not be Prowl without his doorwings, so don't worry. XD
Thanks for your comment. ^^

[femme4jack]

Oh, nicely done! You have a really clear and vivid writing style. I'm been meaning to read this and am looking forward to more.

[usagi_atemu_tom]

Thank you. I am glad to hear you have enjoyed this so far and that I have won another reader for my story. Next chapter will come up next week. Again thank you for reading and especially for leaving a review. ^^

Sincerely

Usagi-Atemu-Tom /`^_^´\

[usagi_atemu_tom]

*coughs* A little edit to me first reply... damn this is what happens when I am supposed to be in bed for hours already. *sighs* Anyway, when I said next chapter will be up next week, I of course meant chapter 11 since I just posted chapter 10. ^^
Since your comment has been about the prologue it would be a bit stupid of me to say that chapter 01 will be up in one week, when it's already out. ^^;
Sorry about that.
I am just too tired to think, therefore I should really leave for bed now, but I wanted to first reply to your review. ^^