Comments | urutan: final fantasy xii

urutan

final fantasy xii - harmony.

Nov 29, 2009 20:29

harmony; balthier, vaan, fran
balthier/vaan
pg-13
~900 words
"It is nearly three in the morning, but Fran knows they are awake."

( She can hear their voices... )

c:balthier, c:vaan, f: ffxii, p:balthier/vaan

Comments 13

_jessen_ November 30 2009, 02:15:03 UTC

aww, that was wonderful. A wonderul reunion and Fran <3
Great job~

urutan November 30 2009, 02:45:22 UTC

Thank you for reading! I was afraid I was starting to lean toward a onesided Fran--->Balthier, but I realized that I couldn't write that if I tried anyway LOL.

perpetuus November 30 2009, 02:46:00 UTC

That was absolutely beautiful ♥

I love how well you wrote the characters, and how you incorporated Fran into the fic without her presense intruiding on what Vaan and Balthier have.

urutan November 30 2009, 02:51:22 UTC

Hehe, your icon. :D And many thanks! How sweet of you.
I kind of like the idea of Fran being the 'watcher-over' of Balthier and Vaan's relationship. Like the wise love-yoda of their piratey gaydom.

malibu_and_coke November 30 2009, 10:28:19 UTC

Really well-written :)

Balthier/Vaan gave me warm fuzzies, and your characterisation of Fran was spot-on! x

urutan November 30 2009, 18:29:34 UTC

Thanks so much! Writing Fran is a very intimidting process. :x

fantasia0829 December 1 2009, 03:20:16 UTC

That was sweet, but not terribly so. Great job. :)

urutan December 1 2009, 17:55:03 UTC

Thanks, I didn't want to overkill on the fluff. Fran helps with that.

rainbowserenity December 3 2009, 20:18:27 UTC

Aw, that was fabulous. It's been a long time since I read a Balthier/Vaan fic that I really liked. ♥

Fran you voyeur xD

urutan December 3 2009, 20:32:12 UTC

Eeee your icon :D :D :D
And thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it!

LOL it was about time someone made that comment.