poem

Oct 09, 2008 18:17

My poem "To Seek Her Fortune" is live at Goblin Fruit.

poetry, preening

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nobu October 10 2008, 03:56:10 UTC
Lovely. I like the final draft.

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nobu October 10 2008, 07:28:04 UTC
Also, i don't know if you recall (or if I ever told you) but I wrote a response to your poem, long ago.

I screen my calls, which I always swore never to do
but we promised much in that age of iron and steel.
When we parted I vowed I'd find you
setting my silver blade into the bark.

I lied.
I walk toward the window, aimless,
staring at garbage-cans, pink buildings, a pale sky.
I can feel you waiting, hear you breathing across the cables.
Somewhere, the blood runs down the tree.

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ursule October 10 2008, 23:59:52 UTC
You did!

And we have all survived the past several years. Go us.

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reasie October 10 2008, 14:56:50 UTC
YAY!

*throws rose petals*

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reasie October 10 2008, 14:58:48 UTC
okay, now I actually read it. Very pretty. *clap clap clap*

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ursule October 11 2008, 00:00:43 UTC
If you hover over the blue dot you can also hear me read it (I think-- I'm a little scared to listen to myself again).

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tejolote October 10 2008, 17:22:13 UTC
This is a beautiful lift to my whole day.

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ursule October 11 2008, 00:05:29 UTC
Wow. Thanks.

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belmanoir October 13 2008, 23:47:22 UTC
that poem is FANTASTIC.

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belmanoir October 13 2008, 23:47:43 UTC
ps can i link it from my journal?

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ursule October 13 2008, 23:49:50 UTC
Yay! Of course!

And I should give llamaontheloose credit for recording me, too-- there's an MP3 if you hover over the blue dot.

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