Comments | urania16: first fic post: The depth of intimacy.

urania16

first fic post: The depth of intimacy.

Mar 16, 2013 14:06

So I am really nervous this is the first fic I post.
I've been writing them for years, believed it was kind of a weird thing to do until I found SI.
From there I found LJ and I learned pretty soon I wasn't the only one:)
With that also came a lot of insecurities.
But I'm taking the plunge now.

This story would have never happened if:
A, akachankami wouldn't ( Read more... )

series: scars of the past complicate the, prompt:scars, series: first fic, sharon and andy fic

Comments 10

sharon_ray March 17 2013, 14:16:57 UTC

Oh my goodness! This is so sweet and endearing. I love, love, LOVE the in-depth view of both Sharon's and Andy's characters in this. Its so great.

urania16 March 17 2013, 18:28:36 UTC

Awe this is such a nice comment,one of the most wonderful I got!

fragrantwoods March 17 2013, 23:38:16 UTC

I can really see them all cuddled up, and then the gentle questioning about scars happening :-) Off to read the next part!

urania16 March 18 2013, 02:21:53 UTC

It's a huge compliment that you can see them all cuddled up like that.
And thank you so much for taking the time to comment twice!

lambrosia March 20 2013, 21:29:50 UTC

uhhh wow, that was perfect.
Love how the story is kinda backwards! where it starts with him admiring her, and than his thoughts turn so much deeper. and only then is it revealed that they slept together! And then the promise of more! yay! loved the line about it not being a one night stand. the prompt was really good and the execution perfect! love how you used it as a revelation of Andy's wanting to 'know' her. fab!

urania16 March 20 2013, 21:42:50 UTC

Hey hon!
Thank you so much for leaving such a wonderful comment, feeling so much better now! :)

and only then is it revealed that they slept together! And then the promise of more! yay!

Did I write that ;)?
I don't know if there will be more, no just kidding I'm teasing you.
Although I'm a bit hesitant about that, not sure whether I'm upto that yet.

It not being a one night stand I just had to write, the hopeless romantic in me, you know.

Thanks so much for taking the time to read and comment. I believe that's FAB! :)

lambrosia March 20 2013, 22:02:08 UTC

lol you know my mind is pretty much as dirty as it gets :p but I wasn't assuming from the start that they actually 'slept' together. yes... that is a first! I kind of interpreted the story as a slow reveal. very sweet and loving.
Of course, at some point you mentioned her hair being fanned out on the pillow, but that still could've gone either way for me. :D

urania16 March 20 2013, 22:09:30 UTC

LOL!

but I wasn't assuming from the start that they actually 'slept' together. yes... that is a first!

Must be because you know me, prude girl as I am, lol!

ozzyj May 18 2013, 08:22:04 UTC

This was lovely :-) I liked the dual POV's - a great first posting! Right...onwards I go...

urania16 May 18 2013, 16:43:19 UTC

Yeah you've found the beginning of my story.
Funny this was supposed to be just this story and it grew out into a series, because everyone kept asking for more.
I'm sure that happens to you all the time.

Thank you so much for the compliment on the dual POV's, this was my first time posting and I was really nervous.