fic: What eyes tell.

Jun 27, 2013 22:10

title: What eyes tell.
pairing: Sharon and Andy
word count: 1.433
Rating: T
genre: romance and a bit of angst at the end of the story
AN: This is a stand alone. I have been experiencing some trouble writing lately and the first lines to this story happened while I was trying to fall asleep the other day. I was inspired by the last episode of MC, ( Read more... )

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xx_nieno June 27 2013, 21:49:32 UTC
Oh wow, I think this is the best you have ever written! When I'm reading it's like I see the whole scene playback in slowmotion in my head. And so angsty! You're good with angsty fics!

I'm so happy you're writing again! *hugs*

Will there be a next part?

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urania16 June 28 2013, 12:48:28 UTC
This comment is so touching!
I wrote this because of you, you know.
I was ready to go to sleep and suddenly the sentances popped into my mind, I grabbed my phone and typed it in a note to myself for the next morning.
This repeated itself for five times, and then Wednesday I wrote it, completed it. And yesterday I typed it just before I went to work, I just had to. For you ;)

The angst kind of crept into it at the end, it didn't start out that way, but I'm hooked on angst, so...Glad you believe I'm good at it.

Will there be a next part?
I kinda knew you were going to ask that, haha!
No I don't think so, maybe when I can come up with something good.
I do have an idea in my mind for the prompt on raydorflynn late night call. And I believe you will be pleased it will be angst to.
I'm still tentative so I will stick to shorter stories for now.

I'd like to *hug* you back for helping me enjoy this again :)!

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xx_nieno June 28 2013, 21:58:19 UTC
A really big THANK YOU! <3

I said another part, I meant, another story. XD can't wait! I will keep an eye out! :3

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ozzyj June 27 2013, 22:08:55 UTC
Ooooh dark and angsty - I like :) and I wasn't expecting that twist! We haven't had series 2 over in the UK yet - so I don't know 'the look' you speak of...but I'm excited to see it when it airs :D!

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urania16 June 28 2013, 12:52:18 UTC
Oh I'm so sorry you haven't seen it yet. I hope I didn't spoil anything for you.
You're lucky with season 1 airing. We don't have MC at all in Holland, not even series 1, but I've been watching online.

If you want to see the look, visit Raydorflynn, Cami did a great gif of that.

Dark and angsty yes that wasn't what I started out with but it just happened. :) I know you like that, I like it too, guess that's why it kind of sneaked into the story.

Thank you so much for reading and taking the time to comment!

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fragrantwoods June 29 2013, 12:44:08 UTC
You've captured all the feelings of that fall into love that is not supposed to be happening, all those moments when everything else just fades. So many beautiful, evocative sentences here that blend into such strong feelings! This feels so accurate for them, how they're both so surprised that this is what's happening. And the angst at the end was so sharp, they'd been happy, almost light-hearted, then...boom. Lovely!

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urania16 July 1 2013, 22:15:26 UTC
This is such a wonderful comment!
I have been very insecure about my writing lately, so this really means a lot to me.
All the lovely compliments I don't even know where to start. Your comment describes everything I was hoping to capture and of course in such better words.
Every time I will be insecure in the upcoming time, I will read this again and be so happy :)
Thank you so so much!

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