Comments | uponamyth: X-files Fic: "Eyes Demanded Light" (Mulder/Scully) NC-17

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X-files Fic: "Eyes Demanded Light" (Mulder/Scully) NC-17

Apr 02, 2009 16:29

Title: Eyes Demanded Light
Author: Truemyth
Pairing / Character: Mulder/Scully
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 1,919
Summary: A concerned Mulder visits Scully in her apartment after Gerald Schnauz’s attack.
Spoilers / Warnings: Episode 4x04, Unruhe. Also, smut.
Author’s Note: Thanks to memories_child for a blazing-hot beta. Thanks also to Inside the X for ( Read more... )

fanfiction: mulder/scully, fanfiction rating: nc-17, tv: x-files, fanfiction: scully, fanfiction, fanfiction: mulder

Comments 36

icedteainthebag April 3 2009, 14:10:50 UTC

Oh, you. This was AMAZING.
I'm a real sucker for a fic where Mulder goes downtown and that's where it ends.

There were so many amazing phrases in this story. Your words are astounding and vivid. I loved it. This was probably my favorite passage, okay, here are two of my faves.

They danced at his entry: Mulder moving towards her, she to one side, leaving a smile behind, final twirl to answer the call of the well-timed kettle, screaming from the kitchen, and he moved with assurance to her computer. They’d become so comfortable with non-verbal communication that things like touch and eye-contact weren’t even needed. Like a well choreographed team, he took his place at the work station, and she passed out warm beverages and took up position in a living room chair.

This is just them, in a nutshell.

Her heart still pounds, but the motion is gaining on her, the rise and fall of her hips, the flick of his sweetly sarcastic tongue will soon out-strip her fragile heart.

Yes.

Really beautiful.

truemyth April 3 2009, 16:02:58 UTC

This was AMAZING.
*clappity* Oh, I'm so glad you like it!

Thanks for the quotes, and yaaaaaay that you find it beautiful.

NO LIP KISSIES, M&S! They fought me on that for a bit.

petite0red0head April 3 2009, 18:15:41 UTC

I love your icon with the white hot intensity of a thousand suns.

icedteainthebag April 3 2009, 18:29:03 UTC

I made it, feel free to steal. Cause yeah. I'd be one of those bubbles.

greydawning April 3 2009, 14:10:53 UTC

This was so beautiful. I loved this line:

Her fingers were clever at his buttons, deft flicks baring more skin for tasting as she raced with her pulse to a place she couldn’t name, chasing the unrest from her body by devouring his.

Perfect post-ep.

truemyth April 3 2009, 16:04:32 UTC

Thanks so much for the comment! Mmmmm Mmmulder flesh.

51stcenturyfox April 3 2009, 14:36:05 UTC

This is lovely.

Now she names the unrest that plagues.

A great fix/ending for the CREEPIEST ep ever (okay, next to Home.)

truemyth April 3 2009, 16:05:23 UTC

I'm glad you liked it! Wow, creepier than Irresistible?

51stcenturyfox April 3 2009, 16:06:52 UTC

Hmm. Tough call! I have a freaky mad doctor squick. :/

(I recced this on my LJ. Hope you don't mind!)

truemyth April 3 2009, 16:11:57 UTC

Oh, yes, that bit when Scully is like "whoever did this, did it wrong." *shudders*

I recced this on my LJ. Hope you don't mind!
Mind? I'm INSANELY flattered! Thanks!

petite0red0head April 3 2009, 16:18:21 UTC

Great piece. Every self respecting Gillesbian should read.

truemyth April 3 2009, 16:40:29 UTC

Every self respecting Gillesbian should read.

Ah, ha, ha... OH MY! I love this endorsement! :D

shosani April 4 2009, 03:01:00 UTC

OHhhh, this is so good. And perfect, because I just watched this episode yesterday.

I absolutely love the continuation of the "unrest", and the fact that Mulder makes it all better. (: And the last line is just perfect. I just read "Clean" as well (will comment, but needed more thinking time as I didn't want to just post "HOT" like everyone else, haha. Even though it very much was.), and you really have a knack for choosing the perfect closing sentence. I wish I could think of a better word, but it's very satisfying. x]

I also love your figurative language. Yay. C:
Love the stuff others have picked out, and also:
A spark of light kindled somewhere to the left of her sternum, and she let her fingers slide further into him, leading with her pinkies along the solid warmth of his skin, coming to rest in the center of his palm, allowing herself to breathe again, the first air not scented faintly by adhesive tape.
Nice.

Uhhhmm. There was something else I was going to say, but I've forgotten! D: Good job, this was a lovely read.

truemyth April 4 2009, 04:44:24 UTC

Oh my, I think I love you! What a wonderful comment. :D

Thanks so much for the details of your reading. It's wonderful to hear when things are picked up on.

♥

truemyth April 4 2009, 19:25:49 UTC

Oh, and I saw you weren't watching xf_is_love, but thought you might want to if you didn't know about it. I also made Unruhe icons and a picspam and there are all kinds of other X-files awesome-things over there.

shosani April 4 2009, 20:03:24 UTC

Oooh, thanks for bringing this to my attention! Will totally be watching. :D