Beach Balls

Nov 27, 2007 16:16

Sitting alone on her patio, Debbie vacantly looks across the water of her pool searching for something out of place, something that needs to be picked up, sanitized, replaced. The beach balls toss and turn on small waves of chorine. Never once played with, these toys exist to signify a past once lost, never to be regained. The actual beach balls ( Read more... )

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Very nice. pairodox November 28 2007, 13:46:42 UTC
Very well written, and depressing. I hope this was a writing exercise. Take care.

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roommates4eva November 28 2007, 20:24:05 UTC
Christmas will never be the same, that's for sure. That is, after you get your combined birthday/Hannukah present that I will mail shortly...

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altosaxbaritone April 28 2008, 20:42:04 UTC
How things have changed, huh?

Come back. I like your writing.

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