No Surrender

Sep 28, 2011 22:28

Title - No Surrender
Author - unwritten_ideasRating - NC-17 ( Read more... )

pairing : gackt x jon, rating : nc-17, character : gackt, character : jon

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rekkazaal September 28 2011, 13:50:50 UTC
1) Thank god I wasn't in class yet.
2) Thank god I had time to finish this first.
*fans* Oh god...

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unwritten_ideas September 29 2011, 16:32:45 UTC
Hahaha, I'm glad the story fitted in with your time schedule!

Thanks for reading.

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leifang666 September 28 2011, 17:38:22 UTC
Ahhh poor You. I agree.

As for the fanservice chemisty: For me it was all Jon. Jon wanted Gackt, Jon wanted Gackt's attention. Gackt couldn't care less. He likes Jon but he didn't respond so in the end you had this aura of a one way relationship.. I was at London btw, I know the fanservice might have been different elsewhere.

Still Gackt X Jon has quickly become one of my fave Gackt pairings so this fic made my day. So well written and hot.

(Gackt X Kami off course will always be my otp just for the record.)

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unwritten_ideas September 29 2011, 16:34:32 UTC
Jon seemed more into it than Gackt. It seemed very business as usual for Gackt, I thought, but he seems more comfortable with it now.

I wouldn't say they're a favourite pairing, but I kinda ship them now.

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leifang666 September 29 2011, 16:36:06 UTC
I found Jon was a fun character to write as the band whore. XD But yes the chemisty was flawed. Not like Gackt X Mana. Gackt looked like he wanted to push Mana off him in disgust sometimes. That's bad fanservice!

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k_no_uta September 28 2011, 19:47:42 UTC

Will...will there be a secon part? You can't let it like this can you........*tries to breathe in slowy and controlled*

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unwritten_ideas September 29 2011, 16:35:08 UTC
I have no plans for a second part. I'm sure they can sort everything out and have a happy ending XD

Thanks for reading!

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cherrylng September 28 2011, 20:54:42 UTC
When You finds out, he's more ripped shit than anyone could expect. Pissed off is an understatement by then. >w>;;;

It's okay Jon, you get an excuse, and run while you can.

And this is a good reading~~~

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unwritten_ideas September 29 2011, 16:35:49 UTC
Yes, I don't think You will be happy or willing to forget easily if he finds out!

Thanks for reading!

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write_my_dreams September 28 2011, 22:39:54 UTC
lol you know what's funny? I was wondering if you'd written this yet as I was walking to class and I decided that if you had, I would read it even though I really do not like Gackt x Jon at all.

Anyway, despite not liking this pairing I really did like this fic. You do did an excellent job writing this and I did like how you compared You to Jon and how Jon is strong enough to match Gackt but You's more gentle with Gackt.

There will be hell to pay in the morning. Poor You, he's going to be crushed when he learns that Gackt really did have sex with Jon. And if Gackt has any decency at all he'll be angry at himself for betraying You. I hope you write a sequel to this.

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unwritten_ideas September 29 2011, 16:39:52 UTC
I'm glad you gave it a chance, and I'm even more glad that you enjoyed it, despite not liking the pairing!

Their fanservice is mainly quite rough, so I couldn't see them being soft and gentle with each other. But You, I can see him doting on Gackt a little too much, even if he is prone to jealous rages XD

I don't have any plans for a sequel. Partly because I don't know the best way to play it with Gackt... I'm sure he'd regret it, but to what extent? It's staying a one shot, I think.

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write_my_dreams September 29 2011, 16:54:58 UTC
I figured I should at least try reading some of it. Once is enough for me XD

I haven't seen the lives yet but I've heard all about the fanservice and it does sound pretty rough. No, I can't either. Aw yes You would always be careful with his Gackt. Unless he's utterly pissed at him.

Oh well, I'll continue it in my head and You can smack Gackt around for being a bitch and then they can have hot makeup sex. That'll give me something to think of at work tonight. Yeah I understand, as much as I want a sequel I can see how it would be hard to continue from this. And it'd be drama heavy

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