you can hear it in the silence

Jan 05, 2017 12:43

Title: you can hear it in the silence
Pairing(s): Sehun/Lu Han
Rating: PG-13
Word count: ~4,200
Summary: Lu Han loves coffee. Sehun thinks this means he loves Starbucks.
Warning(s): Occasional swearing, cheesiness
Written for jinglebellselu round 1

It seems everyone had underestimated how lovestruck Lu Han was. Including his best friend. )

fandom: exo, !fanfic, pairing: sehun/lu han, rating: pg-13, length: oneshot

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tsukarerudesu January 6 2017, 07:23:59 UTC

SO SO SO GOOD.

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Minseok’s face betrays no sense of anxiety whatsoever - perhaps that is why they seem to get along so well. Lu Han needs someone to ground him in his frequent meltdowns in hysteria. -This is such a beautiful way to describe the dynamic.

“Pumpkin spice latte.”

Fuck. -LMAO

fuck you i hope you fail your midterms

He eyes the Venti cup in his hands and wills himself to finish the entire thing because he fucking paid almost 10,000 won for this goddamn piece of trash. -I feel his pain, I REALLY feel his pain. My cafe place was closed before my paper was due and I was so distraught…I am not made of money T T

“He’s in my Mythology class,” explains Baekhyun. “Real nice kid. Can’t believe you violated him like that.” -BAEKHYUN of all people chastising ?!

“Cake,” Chanyeol states as if Lu Han should know exactly why there is a brown paper bag being held in front of his face. -I love this Chanyeol, go wingman Chanyeol!

“No, he has been demolishing every single drink off of the new seasonal menu for Christmas. I think he’
... )

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untitledminds January 8 2017, 11:32:35 UTC
THANK YOU SO MUCH!! (this comment has made my day and probably entire week)

i am so glad that you enjoyed it and found it funny!!! humour is such an important thing to me and i always want to be able to make ppl laugh cause it's the best feeling -- that aside, ikr starbucks is so. overpriced. and it doesn't even taste good askdjsakldjsalk it's literally drinking hot milk

thank you!! it makes me rly happy that you thought that it was realistic + thought luhan was relatable since characterisation is vree important to me :))))) also sehun is just a massive idiot i'll probably portray him like that forever and always bc (wow word vomit here but i miss dumb sehun circa 2012/13 days) ... i love that you liked chanyeol!! maybe i shld write a spin-off for him

THANK YOU FOR READING AND COMMENTING AGAIN!! <3 everything you said really means a lot to me!

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tsukarerudesu January 9 2017, 00:00:55 UTC
Oh! I am so happy ^^. I thought my comment was a bit too long and spazzy. I am currently finishing your suchen fic with jongin. It is ADORABLE. So expect another comment on there shortly.

I will read anything more you write in this universe in a HEARTBEAT. CAN IT BE CHANXIU -- battle of baristas or brewers or whatever.

I hope you have a great coming week ^^

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vixxo_93 January 11 2017, 03:05:52 UTC
The shade being thrown at Starbucks throughout the story was truly entertaining

“I didn’t spend a whole two months forking out money for shitty coffee to let it all go to waste,”
i like how Luhan was like i didn't suffer through all that to not end up with a man at the end of this
Sehun being oblivious to Luhan's plight was too cute

Thanks for writing!!!!

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untitledminds January 13 2017, 04:03:33 UTC
im glad you enjoyed it!!! thank you so much for reading and commenting, it means the world to me <3

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