Enemies with Benefits {5/8?}

[until_the_end_x]

Title: Enemies with Benefits
Summary: There's a fine line between enemies and lovers...
Author: mea... until_the_end_x aka mamoo13
Pairing: Frank/ Gerard, Mikey/Quinn
Rating: NC17
POV: 3rd
Disclaimer: Genuine Fake. If you or one of your friends goes by the name of Frank Iero or Gerard Way, turn back now.
Author's Notes: A High School AU. Prologue based off the ideas

Comments

[xbrokenxrosex]

i totally love this story!!!!

“You look like you got fucked by a truck.”
“Ha… yeah, something along those lines'' = LMAO!!
xx

[until_the_end_x]

Haha, thank you!!!

LOL thanks!!

And thanks for reading!!

♥

[xbrokenxrosex]

oh yer and FC!!

[until_the_end_x]

FC marshmallows!!!

And I'll warn you now... frankiestienn will probably have something to say about you stealing her FC. But it is rightfully yours!

*hands over marshmallows*

♥

[jealousmess]

Ahhh. hot angry sex.
This story is so fantastic!!
I love how it's unpredictable!
Can't wait for moree!
xxx

[until_the_end_x]

Haha, thank you!!! I'm glad the sex was hot enough... =]
And I'm glad you think it's unpredictable, I was worried it was too easy to figure out...

More should be up soon!

♥

[blck_cherry]

Make Bert beat the shit out of Frank!! Oh and then go and fuck Gerard raw (Bert)!!

*grins*

You might wonder what's that thing with me wanting you to make someone beat the shit out of someone else... because angry after-beaten sex is hot (not all kind of course, you know, just in this kind of cases).

btw... can I give you a recomendation? *blushes*
Your slash is good but it could be even better if you added a bit more of detail about it, not explicit close-up detail, but something like... mhmmm... describing the other's facial expresion, those tiny details that give a better view of the action in progress. Because as I told you, i'ts good but looks a bit rushed.

*runs away whistling*

[until_the_end_x]

Hmmmm.... I may have to consider that...=]

Yeah, I understand the reasoning behind it, it's just that I have a hard time writing it. This is as close as I've ever gotten, and it wasn't even all that bad. Love reading it, just can't write it.... can't bring myself to write it....

And thank you, I appreciate the reccomendation. I've always kinda thought my sex scenes were a little lacking, so I'll try to add some of this in next time...

Thank youuuuu!!!!

♥♥

[until_the_end_x]

Aw, well, it's alright... perhaps it knocked more sense into him than you think.... ;]
haha, I guess you'll just have to see... =D

Thank youuuu!!!!

♥