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Of Being Loved

May 13, 2008 22:02

Author: inpurity
Title: Of Being Loved
Genre: Angst - Ficlet
Rating: PG13
Fandom:Frank/Gerard
Summary:It has been ten years, and life has been good to both of them, but sometime not even good it's enough.
Word Count: 626
Disclaimer:This is a work of fiction, not written for profit. I claim no connection with any member of MCR their families or friends. ( Read more... )

frank iero, pg13, fiction, mcr, gerard way

Comments 24

blueautopsy May 13 2008, 21:47:01 UTC

*tears*
that was beautifully devastating.
well done sweetie
xxx

inpurity May 13 2008, 22:16:08 UTC

Thank you very much!

tweatyhobbs May 13 2008, 22:14:53 UTC

what happened?!?!?!?!? this is soo gorgeuos and just terribly sad!!! i want to cry but i can't becaus ei dont knw what went wrong, its like an ache!! this is the best story i have read in a long time

inpurity May 13 2008, 22:19:02 UTC

*blushes*
Thank you so much!
The story is open to interpretation, but mostly is just t e natural end of a love story.

faithfulriver26 May 13 2008, 23:30:22 UTC

I love this kind of ending. I love endings. I hate happily ever afters. So when Some one cuts to the chase and doesn't bullshit around and just goes for the ending. That emotion evoking moment that I just love. Because as much as I love it, it frustrates me and pisses me off and works me up. Because all I can wonder is why? why? And I immediately want to fix it. And I know I can't so I'm frustrated. And, being raised like so many other kids on happy endings and bullshit lies about forever, I love real true believable endings that hold true to the way people really are. And it scares me because that's reality so its hard to read because again, told lies all my youth. And I love the truth of it. Because that's life. Things grow and peak and fall and end and then it happens again and again. Stability is never permanent. And. . . you shattered their stability in this. And I appreciate that. I like how shattering lies like forever and stability feel. Because its hard to accept and deal with and its sad and scary because it leads into the ( ... )

inpurity May 14 2008, 15:17:37 UTC

Thank you so much. I was, and still am, really touched by your words.
I adore writing and when someone takes the time to reply in this manner, with this much soul and understanding, it makes my little rotten heart swell up three sizes.

I wish I was able to tell you how much this comment meant to me.
THANK YOU, from the bottom of my heart.

faithfulriver26 May 18 2008, 19:40:43 UTC

You are so welcome
And thank you for sharing. I love that you are able to get that sort of reaction out of MY rotten heart.

Again you are so welcome. responses to my comments like this always make my day. so thank you as well!

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crashingxxhigh May 14 2008, 01:38:09 UTC

You captured a moment in their lives. It was like listening in on a conversation that you didn't know exactly what was going on.
Awesome!!

inpurity May 14 2008, 06:16:52 UTC

Thank you very much ! I hope it wasn't too confusing, I tried to keep it vague on purpose.
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closetfanatic May 14 2008, 03:25:01 UTC

Completely beautiful, as ever. Your writing never ceases to amaze me.

inpurity May 14 2008, 06:14:50 UTC

Thank you so much, you are way too kind.
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