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unsentimentalf

FIC: Karl's Boys (NC-17) 2/7

Aug 08, 2011 18:19

Title: Karl’s Boys 2/7
Author: Unsentimental Fool
Fandom: The Most Incredible Thing (ballet)
Pairing: Karl/the boys
Rating: NC-17 (this part)
Word count (this part) 3,600 words

Summary:Life in the Kingdom is hard. If you want to escape the drudgery of the factories, you do whatever you have to. Josef is the youngest recruit to Karl's gang. It' ( Read more... )

fic, karl's boys, the most incredible thing

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unsentimentalf August 8 2011, 21:17:02 UTC

He's very receptive to learning. I like that about him!

thymelady August 10 2011, 11:05:07 UTC

What a practical young man he is, our Josef. I like him a lot! He is right: there should be a drilling. I shake my head over the double meanings there, how do you do it? X-D

Good sex scene there, great descriptions of Josef's impressions and thoughts, while Gabs is on his mind. And I think you get the dancing themes in there, both in drilling and fucking. ;-) They really are dancers, as you say.

unsentimentalf August 10 2011, 18:20:09 UTC

He is practical, and so completely free of angst. A blessed relief after all those arrogant/tormented types that keep sneaking their way into my writing :-)

Having so much fun writing 7 characters! I think this is going to end up with more than 5 chapters, somehow. Although ch 3 does progress with ballet plot a little!