[12] C'est La Mort [Nichkhun/Wooyoung, Nichkhun/Taecyeon]

[verocity]

Fic Title: C'est La Mort
Main Character: Nichkhun
Pairing: Nichkhun/Wooyoung, Taecyeon/Nichkhun
Warning(s): character death, language
Word count: 4,311

Prompt 1: You might think I'm your enemy, but that don't make you mine - Enemy, Jack Johnson
Prompt 2: Read more... )

Comments

[ext_2399979]

ASFKLAGKLADGAKG;;AGLDÖKG; WHERE DO I BEGIN?????!
First of all I love the title! So ominous and playful at the same time;;;
Secondly, I love the atmosphere that the underwater theme - transformed into aquarium setting - brings, so peaceful and dark and deep at the same time. Like you wrote "always danger looming around" WHICH IS ANOTHER THING I LOVE, the delicate clues and hiccups placed to forebode trouble D:

The story is so expertly told and I am such a sucker for good plotwork;;;;; Love how it's rapid, dense, progressing with emotions and drama all parallel. LOVE THE ACTION PARTS AND THE LOVE PARTS ALIKE omg i had so many scares and breathless moments trying to get to the end without dying;;;;;;

AND THE ENDING. THE ENDING;;;;;; it is all I want from an ending, which is ultimately the final impression and what lingers - SO HEARTBREAKING, so double, such an evil cut to black. I LOVE YOU <3333333

[ext_2040056]

omg Looved how smart you were with all three prompts. When I read underwater my mind goes to all places, but you made it beautiful and meaningful in a totally different way. Also the lyrics, amazing.

and that ending... heartbreaking. Especially because Wooyoung took that time, knowing what he did, but even like that he decided they needed those moments, maybe a normal existence like Khun wanted ;____;

But I like the ending. Like the shocking value despite the

[mychocotango]

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[mychocotango]

The ending killed me.
that is all.
;A;