SPN FIC - It takes a town - Part II

Dec 13, 2011 20:06

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PART II

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unplugged32 December 14 2011, 12:44:02 UTC
Thanks babe, it's a little cheesy, a little cliche but I think that since it's a western/period story it was bound to be, you know?

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dreamlitnight December 14 2011, 16:03:56 UTC
I so enjoyed Western!Winchesters. I really liked the way you brought some of my favorite Supernatural characters into the different reality with the boys and it just worked.

The style of your writing is nice too, moves things along, but with enough detail to paint a vivid picture of what is happening.

Thank you for making my morning happier!

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unplugged32 December 14 2011, 18:37:04 UTC
And thank you for making my evening happier with your lovely comment!! :)

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quickreaver December 14 2011, 19:19:56 UTC
I finally finished reading last night AND YOU GET ALL THE LOVE! I totally adore your spin on The Boys Out West. But you know what I really liked? Jess and Lisa! You made me want the boys to wind up with them (which I'm not opposed to; I think the Women of Supernatural are all kinds of awesome.)

This tale was SO much fun! Thank you from the bottom of my heart; I couldn't be happier. Well done, m'dear!

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unplugged32 December 14 2011, 19:23:34 UTC
I'm so glad you liked it:) Thanks so much for your kind words, they mean alot!

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monicawoe December 15 2011, 04:22:36 UTC
Awesome! This setting fits the boys (and Bobby) like a glove. Nice use of Ellen, Jess and Lisa, too!

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unplugged32 December 15 2011, 05:30:38 UTC
Thanks so much for taking the time to read and comment, I'm so glad you liked it:)

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soncnica December 18 2011, 17:32:25 UTC
THIS WAS AWESOME!! I loved it a lot! really great setting, Sam and Dean were awesome and even Lisa and Jess didn't bother me, like they usually do in stories.... very awesome! and aww on the girls picking up on Sam and Dean's co-dependency... because yes, so true!
and I kinda didn't like Bobby when he told Sam (in part 2) that no, Dean isn't the only one Sam has, that he has Bobby and Ellen and Lisa and all those people... idk why, but that really made me dislike all of what he said, because while yes, Sam does have all of them, but THEY are not his brother, not flesh and blood and no one can replace his brother... so yeah, kinda rolled my eyes at Bobby there, because he of all people should know that brothers isn't the same as friends :)

but anyways... very cool story, I liked it a lot :)

S.

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unplugged32 December 18 2011, 18:45:25 UTC
Thanks so much for taking the time to read and comment:) The part you didn't like; Bobby is trying to reason with Sam, if Dean were to die he wouldn't be alone and so forth but you are right, the bond that the brothers share is very rare and very special:)

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soncnica December 18 2011, 18:52:54 UTC
hey!
it was a great story and a great story deserves a comment :))) (even if it's just by little old me)
I loved the story it was just that tiny part that I disliked, but mostly because Bobby of all people should've known that what Sam and Dean have is.. unique and that even if he'd try only to reason with Sam, it wouldn't work anyways :)))))
but I totally GET why he did that, hell a lot of people would do it, right!? show Sam that even if he'd be alone he wouldn't be really alone :)
but in the very end, the boys are brothers and there is no reason when it comes to blood and family :)))

hugs
S.

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unplugged32 December 18 2011, 19:50:08 UTC
Yeah, Sam was feeling pretty lost, and Bobby tried to make him feel a little less alone. Thanks again for your interest, you really made my day:)

**hugs** back

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