Help!

[unomesowell]

Ok I had to write a paper for my "How to change the world" course. Its worth half my grade and I am freaking out! I really really want some critic to go over this with a fine tooth comb. And maybe some suggestions on a better title? Please? I got nobody else to help me so I am throwing it out and hoping somebody has the patients to read the

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[gracies_mom]

I'm going to copy and paste this in a word file, I'll read and edit it and have my hubby (he's a teacher) read and edit it and then I'll either email it to you, or post it, whichever you would like.

ps, I'll need your email address!

[gracies_mom]

if you could send the original to me in a file, that would be great. thende@gmail.com

[unomesowell]

I don't think I can. My email has gone insane and now I can no longer send email I can only recieve! I can't even open a compose box! Sorry. But thank you for trying so hard!

[unomesowell]

unomesowell@yahell.com or unome.sowell@hatemail.com
Thank you so much that would be so helpful! Your husband might kill you but its so helpful!
(make the changes to email I just don't want spam!)